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 3rd Nov 2007 04:00
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| Uncertainty green water fantasy wanting it all—on call is that too much ?? thin autumn light reflects memories on the surface is this awkward ?? muted russets bleed and sugar chemistry lingers is it to be left alone ?? sun-lit lips self-arguing plotting liquid boundaries is it here, not there ?? | ||||||
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25th Nov 2007
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Clitterville Posts: 164
|  Re: Uncertainty Lushi honey... Never enough to be said about your work love.. Love this as much as I do all your mind and "clitter" shaking stories and poems... Contemplations and uncertainties aside the words flow..something you've mastered so well hon... As always waiting for more...FFA |
 
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15th Feb 2008
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Re: Uncertainty Gorgeous and skillfully wrought.
__________________ "Its not easy, being green...but green's the color of Spring...it's beautiful, and I think it's what I wanna be." (Kermit the frog) |
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27th Jun 2008
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Baltimore County Posts: 22
| Re: Uncertainty interesting format, I like the uniqueness of this piece, good job
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