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When First We Begin
Old 28th Aug 2009 19:56
peppercorn
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Our purpose drives us onward,
Until, finally the goal is achieved.


but our curiosity
pushes us forward,
and we advance,


gaining a foothold.
like a child

climbing a
mountain peak--


our task seems
so distant, so
very far away--


When first
we begin.
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Old 7th Sep 2009   #1
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nice *smile
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Old 9th Sep 2009   #2
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So true. So true.
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Old 1st Jan 2010   #3
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Pepper, I think your wonderful mind has depths we've not yet seen. This was so simple in wording, but so pregnant with meaning.
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