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Whisper
Old 17th Jun 2007 01:00
oshkrozz
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Whisper, starting on the lips, gently flows
Brushing against the ear
Sweetness in the words spoken, a light caress
The touch soft as the lips pull back
Replaced with the soft feel of the finger
The tip moving from the ear to the lips
Tracing the outline and drawing forth a whisper
Inviting closer, eyes embraced as the finger divides us
Our lips wrapped around the barrier as just words are spoken
Your fragrance enters me and fills my heart
A passion awakes inside my lips burning
Wanting to touch and be complete
That one finger still divides as it moves along your lips
Drawing them closer still
I feel the warmth of your breath
The beating of your heart as each motion is slow
My hands cupping your face as the lips meet
Sensation racing through the body
Blood flowing and feeling the life
Feeling the touch of the lips
The caress of the sweet whisper of breath
We unite as the breathing fades into each kiss
And between us still the whisper
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Old 17th Jun 2007   #1
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Simply beautiful, osh! Just beautiful.........

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Old 25th Jun 2007   #2
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Ditto, Lushi...
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Old 17th Feb 2008   #3
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Sometimes poetry delivers truth. This is one of those that does. It also does it with great beauty. Very lovely poem Osh. All kisses should be just this. Fusion.
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Old 26th Aug 2009   #4
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A beautiful and intimate piece of writing! I almost felt that my mind was reading it too loud, interrupting such a beautiful moment. Thanks for sharing with us such a wonderful poem. I loved it.
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