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| Whisper, starting on the lips, gently flows Brushing against the ear Sweetness in the words spoken, a light caress The touch soft as the lips pull back Replaced with the soft feel of the finger The tip moving from the ear to the lips Tracing the outline and drawing forth a whisper Inviting closer, eyes embraced as the finger divides us Our lips wrapped around the barrier as just words are spoken Your fragrance enters me and fills my heart A passion awakes inside my lips burning Wanting to touch and be complete That one finger still divides as it moves along your lips Drawing them closer still I feel the warmth of your breath The beating of your heart as each motion is slow My hands cupping your face as the lips meet Sensation racing through the body Blood flowing and feeling the life Feeling the touch of the lips The caress of the sweet whisper of breath We unite as the breathing fades into each kiss And between us still the whisper | ||||||
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| Comments to Story: Whisper |
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| Vintage Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Not in Kansas Posts: 385
| Simply beautiful, osh! Just beautiful......... Lushi |
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| Vintage Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 32
| Ditto, Lushi... |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Sometimes poetry delivers truth. This is one of those that does. It also does it with great beauty. Very lovely poem Osh. All kisses should be just this. Fusion.
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| Moderator Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Frolicking in the woods. Posts: 1,556
| A beautiful and intimate piece of writing! I almost felt that my mind was reading it too loud, interrupting such a beautiful moment. Thanks for sharing with us such a wonderful poem. I loved it.
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