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| "Fuck me, Oh my yes FUCK ME!!" she screamed over and over as he pounded into her. Her legs straight up in the air, held there by his wide shoulders and powerful arms, toes curling as she climaxed over and over. He continued to fuck her with deep hard strokes never pausing as she shook and quivered in her orgasms. Unable to take anymore she screamed again, her whole body electrified as she squirted on his rock hard cock, tightening her pussy finally driving him over the edge. "DAMN" he yelled, calling out her name, as he flooded her inner walls with cum, spurting over and over before rolling over to her side as her legs fell back onto the bed. Reaching over he pulled her to him, holding her close as the cool air dried the sweat from their naked bodies. Stroking her skin as she snuggled into his arm, head resting on his chest, their mixed fluids draining down her thighs before pooling on the sheet. "You know that was the best yet" she whispered to him, her hand trailing cross his stomach before coming to rest on his flaccid cock. She smiled as she felt the slickness coating it, wondering if this was all a dream. Just to make sure she slid down his body, one hand cupping his balls and other wrapped around the base of his cock as she lowered her head down engulfing him in her mouth. The salty taste of his cum mixed with hers made her sure it was not a dream. No dream could feel so good, taste so good or make you come so hard. Slowly sliding his cock in and out of her mouth she felt him start to grow hard again. Pulling her mouth away with a soft "pop" she bathed it's length with her tongue before licking the tip and running her tongue around the ridge. She loved to feel him harden in her mouth, the feeling was one of power. She knew she could keep him on edge for a long time with just her mouth, just as she also knew his talent at returning the favor.
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| Comments to Story: Is it Porn or Erotica? |
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| Chat Moderators Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Dover , De Posts: 1,392
| Ok well let me first say .... Great job Night :-) I do so enjoy your storys ..... Well I would say that this story in my opinion Is porn ...I say this because of the graphic wording used in it ... But that's just me :-D |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Tennessee Posts: 588
| That is a really tough call night. I am not sure which category to place this one in... But I will say that as always you have found a new way to make us think while you turn us on... bravo on a job well done. |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 35
| Not to add to the confusion in your mind, I would say it is very erotic porn.... great job Night. |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,191
| Loved this story, Night! and...ummmm....yes, what cocoa said!! xoxo |
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| Chat Moderators Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Dover , De Posts: 1,392
| Ok I wish to change what I said before ..... after give it some thought and doing a little research I would have to say that ...... well now it just looks as if I'm copying , but it is true I think cocoa said it best ...... |
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| Vintage Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Not in Kansas Posts: 385
| Hi, night. Another great one from you. Enjoyed it. Basically my standard is that erotica has a well defined story line, like so many other wonderful stories you have written. Porn is very vivid wall-to-wall pile driving sex with little if any story line and virtually no conversation. So, darlin', as much as it flies in the face of what everyone else has said, this is porn. But given the chance to re-enact it, I could change my mind. lol |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Illinois Posts: 416
| Glad you liked it lushi...and you keep that cute tush as an avatar much longer you may get your wish Hugs |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 35
| Yeah lushi, Is that really you? or should my body be falling in lust with someone else |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: London Area UK Posts: 8
| To answer that you would need to agree on the definition of each category, something that has been argued over for a long time. I believe that basically porn and erotica are the same, in the sense that the object is to create sexual arousal in the reader. To a large extent the category given to a story is decided by the publisher. The same story could appear in a "men's magazine" and be called porn, and yet if published in a fancy "journal" be described as erotica. I broadly agree with Lushi's definitions for use in general terms. But I believe that for maximum arousal, the best formula is something in between her definitions. I try to write graphic sex with a plausible plot line, and am happy to call it porn, plain and simple. For me, too much unnecessary background in a story distracts from the sex. Equally, too much graphic sex without motivation, explanation, or character description does not arouse me. With apologies and due respect to Night, for me his story falls into the latter category, and I did not find it arousing. However the very clever ending rescued it as a story. Full marks for that. It is endings like that, which make short stories excellent. |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: London - ish Posts: 344
| Arguing over definitions for this kind of thing never really seems to get anyone very far. This story is HOT! I don't really mind of it's erotica or porn, I really like it. For me it's porn though. We learned little of the characters, the setting or anything else. But I don't think that's a bad thing. Written porn like that is awesome and that's a great example. My dilemma now though is that if I give it a good vote, it'll be above my story in the TIT ratings... hmmm.... conundrum.... what to do?? |
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