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Old 14th Oct 2009 15:47
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“Tonight is the night. There’s nothing more to think about”, she thought to herself as she got dressed that afternoon.


She put on a skirt and a button up blouse with nothing underneath to make it easier for herself when the time came.


She settled into bed to wait for him to come over after she’d finished preparing for her blissful night. As she waited she imagined what it would be like to be in his arms, she wondered if he would be gentle, she imagined his hard cold body against hers. Her imagination got away from her and she began to breathe hard and her face felt hot, she imagined it red as a coal.


Evening turned into night and Emma began to get impatient, she looked forlornly toward the door, why, she didn’t know. Every time Xander had come by before he never used the door, he was a window man. Emma laughed out loud at her wit.


While she sat looking towards her window she felt a breeze go across her legs. She looked away from the window just in time to see him closing her bedroom door.


“Are you crazy, what if Don would have been home?” She asked him with impatience in her voice.


“Don is at the station taking care of some issues with your boyfriend Zach Ryan.” He told her with a smug smile on his beautiful angelic face. Emma wanted so bad to say something to hurt him like he’d tried hurting her but the passion she felt when she looked at him was stronger than any need to get him back.


Emma turned her back on him and suddenly he was at her side. He touched the side of her face with his fingers as if he’d read the longing for him in her mind.


“Tonight,” He whispered in her ear, “You are all mine!”


He took her face in his hands and kissed her feverishly and carelessly. She felt his tongue in her mouth and she went crazy. She lost all control and took his hair in both her hands and began to kiss him back. She felt his teeth with her tongue and felt the smoothness of them. She wondered how it was possible for something so beautiful to be so deadly.


While he kissed her he didn’t notice she’d started undressing herself. She unbuttoned her shirt and slipped it off. He looked down and noticed her perfect pale breasts with their perfect pink nipples and got dizzy with passion.


“Why do you do this to me? Do you understand how irresistible you are to me?”


She didn’t care. She took his hands and placed them on her breasts, she then put both of her hands into his shirt and caressed his back and chest with her fingers.


He began to kiss her breasts and then slowly began to lick them, as he did so he began to caress her body and he slipped his hands down her side. He hadn’t noticed she was wearing a skirt, while his hands were exploring her nether area he reached under the skirt and found she wasn’t wearing anything else. He slipped off the skirt and felt her wetness. He continued to kiss her breasts as his hands explored her.


He slowly began to move down toward her belly and kissed every inch of her body. When he finally got to her wetness he slipped his tongue in and tasted her sweet nectar.

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Old 13th Dec 2009   #1
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I liked that you could see the emotions and glimpse into the thoughts of your characters. Very well-written, with vivid imagery.

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Old 19th Dec 2009   #2
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This story has a great concept, would love to see a serial story made from this, only critizism I would have is that I would have loved to see a little more background on the characters.
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Old 2nd Feb 2010   #3
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Nicely done Sofi, makes me want to tickle you with my tongue...
good job. I enjoyed this a lot.
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Old 14th Mar 2010   #4
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Wow!! Sofi! This was really quite a good piece of writing. You had me captivated. Then again you always have. It is so nice to see you publishing!
I love the theme. With a little thought it can be really revealing for anyone who reads it. You are one subtly deep lady Sofi. Congratulations!
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Old 14th Mar 2010   #5
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Glad you liked it. I try to write what I feel and I feel naughty a lot! ;D
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