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| Other girls noticed it as well. Reports however, were whispered back from the few who went out with him that he was a mauler. I simply guessed he was still a virgin and just hadn’t learned how to act. Part of the attraction of Frank was the opportunity to show an innocent guy his first real fun and teach him how to behave. By way of feminine wiles naturally available to me I let him know I was interested. It surprised him at first that a smart, popular, and pretty girl was flirting with him but he finally asked me out to a movie. Apparently he had figured out how to behave on his own, because he was an absolute gentleman with me. We went to a couple of movies together and we talked often quite animatedly about them afterward. I liked his insights. He impressed me as more intelligent than anyone gave him credit for. And like I said, he was a perfect gentleman, after a couple of dates he only ventured one little kiss. I thought I intimidated him. I then decided that with the end of school coming, I’d better take a more aggressive approach. I drove out to the Oakwood Motel to visit Frank one evening. He had his own apartment behind the check-in office of the motel ever since his parents moved into town leaving him as the “night manager” the previous fall. When I arrived at the Oakwood, I pressed the little ring-for-service buzzer on the counter. When he finally answered after my third ring he was surprised to see me, but he invited me into his back patio area and we drank iced tea while we sat and talked. We didn’t even get halfway through our glasses of tea before Frank told me that Mrs. Cornell, the fourth grade teacher at Roosevelt Elementary School – the one I had attended – was having an affair with an insurance man. I couldn’t believe him. Then he asked me if I wanted to see for myself! I’m a curious girl, how could I refuse? He made me promise to be perfectly quiet and that we needed to keep the lights off so he warned me not to flip any switches. Then he led me to the next room over, room 16, and opened the door just wide enough for us to slip inside. It was hard to see, it was dusk outside so not much light came in around the drawn curtains of the room. Frank took my hand and guided through the room to the back wall. I could just make out a wide vanity counter with a sink. There was a strange glow given off by the mirror. Frank put my hand on the edge of the counter and whispered in my ear, “You can see through the back of the mirror into Room 3 on the other side.” There was one chair facing the mirror. Frank had me sit there, and he kneeled on the floor next to me. I could hear voices on the other side, just murmurs really, and make out two forms on the bed, but not much was going on. “They might be done,” Frank whispered, “At least you’ll get to see who it is.” We waited a while and it was getting pretty boring. “This is bad,” I said. “Yeah, I’m sorry, it is. I shouldn’t have brought you here.” Frank said “No, we’re not bad,” I said, “I mean yeah we are, but I meant it’s a waste of time to be in here when I came to visit you.” “Yeah, OK. Let’s go,” Frank whispered.
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| Comments to Story: Annie Magdow, Girl Voyeur |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,191
| Great follow up, Rotsen! I am glad I got to find out about Annie. Well written from her point of view and omigosh, does it bring back memories about sex when I was much younger. Keep it up! |
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| Vintage Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Not in Kansas Posts: 385
| I love Annie! I love this story. And you, Mr. Rotti, are my favorIte author. Stay inspired, dear! |
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| Vintage Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Texas Posts: 150
| Excellent story that I enjoyed very much. Thanks for sharing. Now where can I find Annie? |
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| mindspired Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Detroit Posts: 39
| So all we had to do was ask, and voila! Here it is--an amazing follow up. Nice work, Rotsen! I just LOVE Annie...what is it about that girl? Hmmmm... Keep 'em coming, Rotti. xoxo, r.o.n. |
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| mindspired Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 23
| Great story! Frank was a lucky guy! :hammer: |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: East Coast Posts: 21
| Once again, another magnificent story by Rotsen! Great story line, loveable characters, wonderful sex...but 5th grade spelling bee champion??? Pleaaaseee...Pittsburg(h)! LOL |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Eastern Pennsylvania Posts: 98
| Good catch, PJ! Thanks for your comment and I am glad you enjoyed reading Annie! But please don’t blame her, five times spelling bee champion that she was, for misspelling Pittsburgh. I accept full blame for removing the “h” when I edited her manuscript thinking it was in error. LOL That mistake I understand, is not an uncommon problem for people living closer to Harrisburg, Pennsylvania than Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania. Rotsen |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: London Area UK Posts: 8
| Thanks for that excellent tale Rotsen. Two things in particular pleased me. Your remarkable and valid insight into the way a woman's mind might work. Not something that many male authors achieve, or even attempt. Angie came over as a plausible character, if perhaps a touch precocious :lol: The other thing was your skill with dialogue. I think that you have a real gift for that. Good dialogue is not the easiest of things to write. Jill |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| This is in my favorite style: a full, contextualized scene of erotic activities, allowing the feeling and surprises to just happen so naturally. I also like the way you show how what we anticipate will happen, often is sidetracked into something often more interesting. At any rate, I thoroughly enjoyable and endearing read. Yes, Ready is right: Annie is a sweetheart.
__________________ "Its not easy, being green...but green's the color of Spring...it's beautiful, and I think it's what I wanna be." (Kermit the frog) |
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| mindspired Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 9
| excellent story! where did you get such an insight into the mind of a teenage girl? amazing job!
__________________ And yet, to say the truth, reason and love keep little company together nowadays. - A Midsummer Night's Dream |
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