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Moonlight and Roses
Old 2nd Aug 2009 09:45
brassy
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<P align=center>MOONLIGHT AND ROSES



The ‘Annual Summer Dance’ was drawing to a close. I sat in the corner quietly on my own, sipping my lemonade, and looking down at my silver dress; I wonder why the hell I had even bothered!

I hadn’t had a dance partner all night, occasionally I had stolen a momentary glance in your direction, you always seemed so preoccupied though, I knew I never stood a chance with you.

As the band struck up its final slow number of the night, it just had to be my favourite love song of all time, ‘Moonlight and Roses’. I looked down, and as my soft auburn tresses fell about my shoulders a single tear dropped off my face onto my lap.

“No! No beautiful lady like you should shed tears on this night!”

Then I hear the magical words I have longed to hear all evening;

“Please dance with me.”

I look up to see where those dark sultry tones are coming from. I see you standing before me so proud and yet elegant in your tux, your arm outstretched offering me your hand.

Putting down my drink, I take your hand, and you lead me onto the dance floor. You guide one of my arms around you and slide an arm of your own around my waist. You then take hold of my other hand and as I lay my head on your shoulder and close my eyes you swirl me around expertly.

Then you whisper in my ear, saying that you have been watching me and trying to drum up the courage to ask me to dance all night.

Looking up at you,starlight dances in my eyes as you see the happiness there. You bend your head over and your cheek touches mine as your lips search for mine. Our lips brush and you plant one single soft kiss on them. Then I part my lips slightly and you trace the edges with the tip of your tongue before edging shyly into my mouth and touching my own tongue sending a shiver right down my spine.

Holding me closer you swirl me around again then gently dip me backwards gazing directly in my eyes as you do. You are the perfect dance partner

My leg brushes yours as you draw me so close to you and our bodies touch. I feel your heartbeat pounding against my breasts.

Tears of happiness whelm up in my eyes as we each sense our own arousal growing.

The rest of the World melts away, it is just you me and the music, and we kiss again.

I want this time to last forever.

But the music ends all too soon and we still hold each other. So as our arms drop down and we smile at each other you take my hand and lead me out into the moonlit night to sit on a bench in the rose garden.

We look at each other, smile, and then all of a sudden we are in each others arms kissing with such a fervent passion, the likes of which I have never known.

Your tongue searches out every corner of my mouth, then dances its own love dance with my own tongue.

My heart races and my breasts heave as my inner flame of desire burns brightly and you say to me;
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Old 4th Aug 2009   #1
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Welcome to the mindspired authors group! Very good flow, especially on the dance floor and a nice story from the heart. We appreciate your valued contribution. Keep up the good work!
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Old 4th Aug 2009   #2
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Great start, brassy! I am a sucker for romantic stories, myself. Good flow...can't wait to read more from you! :-)
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Old 5th Aug 2009   #3
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Very romantic *smile* nice work !!
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Old 6th Aug 2009   #4
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Welcome to the fold brassy! Like the story as well Great start to a long 'spired relationship, with many more to come I hope!
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Old 10th Aug 2009   #5
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Very nice Brassy. I must say a beautiful start to what promises to be a wonderful relationship with the entire Mindspired family. Congrats.
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Very enticing... felt really drawn in to this. Great uses of description and metaphor and the romance was really powerful.

Can't wait to read more of your work, and let me join everyone in welcoming you to the Mindspired gang
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Absolutely wonderful story. So beautifully written, truly romantic, as if taken from a romance novel. Excellent job, dear.
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Old 6th Sep 2009   #8
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I love this story it's very romantic and lovely. It was wonderfully writen, good job.
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A tender and romantic story for two very passionate characters. Your words delight the senses of the reader. It was a pleasure to share such an enjoyable encounter.
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Wow Jacquie...it is a shame to have to come back down to Earth after that...wonderful...
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