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Moonlight and Roses (Page 3)
Old 2nd Aug 2009 08:45
brassy
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You let the rose continue its travels, taking it all around my breasts my stomach, slowly, gently, for maximum effect, marvelling at the way my body is squirming now and the gasps of delight that escape my mouth.

Your own bulging manhood strains now and you ask permission to remove your clothing. What a Gentleman!

Then you run the rose down the outer sides of my thighs and legs, and as my hips rise with burning needs, now you look up at me and say,

“Patience my dear, I want you never to forget this night!”

Then, and only then do you reach up to my panties and glide them down over my stocking clad legs kissing my legs all the way down to my toes as you do so.

I am so hot for you now, my body is crazy with desire and you know it!

You sense my body is building up to a huge crescendo and massive orgasm.

“Not yet, my love, let me give you more.”

Then you bend and kiss my shaven pussy with such refinement and caring it makes my whole body tingle and jump. Your tongue searches out my clit and on discovery find it moist, hard and inviting. After swirling your tongue around it a few times you take the hard nub between your teeth and nibble on it.

This makes me wild and my moans give way to squeals of delight. I’m not sure who is getting the most pleasure!

“Tonight is for you my love,” and you smile that infectious smile as you speak these words to me.

Then you pick up the rose again and trace a line along the inner sides of my legs, angel touches that drive me wild to moaning again, purring like a kitten, and, looking at my face, watching the ever changing expressions of delirious desire you track the rose around my inner thighs right up to my pussy, where its petals come into contact with my own velvety petals at the gateway to my garden of desire.

Then you let the beautiful petals move inside me slightly, just gently for your desire is only to make me happy, and this tips me way over the edge.

Suddenly my hips buck, my back arches and I grasp the quilt as my dam bursts with the most amazing orgasm I have ever experienced in my whole life!

My nectar soaks the rose and you lift it up to your mouth and suck the petals readily!

Then you place the flower down and lay on the bed where once again our bodies entwine as our kisses are like an everlasting flame. I hold you close to me and you reach round to unhook my bra. You lay your head amidst the spillage of my breasts and stroke them tenderly with your fingertips.

Your lips then suckle on my hard but sensitive nipples which are desirable yet comforting to you.

Two fingers return to my pussy, searching out the most sensitive spots and the sweet juices that are inside me.

Your fingers move regularly in rhythm. In and out your fingers slide hooking and finding my G spot making me scream “Yeeeessssss!”

Your own enjoyment is quite obvious to see too as I watch your own face contort and feel your body move around on me.

I take a glance down and see your upward rising manhood. Standing to attention to convey all of your desires.

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Old 4th Aug 2009   #1
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Welcome to the mindspired authors group! Very good flow, especially on the dance floor and a nice story from the heart. We appreciate your valued contribution. Keep up the good work!
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Old 4th Aug 2009   #2
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Great start, brassy! I am a sucker for romantic stories, myself. Good flow...can't wait to read more from you! :-)
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Old 5th Aug 2009   #3
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Very romantic *smile* nice work !!
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Old 6th Aug 2009   #4
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Welcome to the fold brassy! Like the story as well Great start to a long 'spired relationship, with many more to come I hope!
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Old 9th Aug 2009   #5
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Very nice Brassy. I must say a beautiful start to what promises to be a wonderful relationship with the entire Mindspired family. Congrats.
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Old 13th Aug 2009   #6
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Very enticing... felt really drawn in to this. Great uses of description and metaphor and the romance was really powerful.

Can't wait to read more of your work, and let me join everyone in welcoming you to the Mindspired gang
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Absolutely wonderful story. So beautifully written, truly romantic, as if taken from a romance novel. Excellent job, dear.
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Old 6th Sep 2009   #8
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I love this story it's very romantic and lovely. It was wonderfully writen, good job.
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A tender and romantic story for two very passionate characters. Your words delight the senses of the reader. It was a pleasure to share such an enjoyable encounter.
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Wow Jacquie...it is a shame to have to come back down to Earth after that...wonderful...
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