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| Tallahatchie Bridge - The Real Story (Page 3) |
 24th Oct 2007 07:00
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| [/b][/b] Well, Billy Joe just leaned over an planted a little kiss right on her lips. It was just a little one, but I swear I thought I saw lightn'n when he did. He looked her right in the eyes an' said, "Li'l darlin' I love you so deep down inside me, it just hurts all over that I can't find words good enough to say, so here, take this and know from now on you are my wife." While he was 'a sayin' it he took her hand and slid a li'l silver ring on her finger. She smiled at him, and I swear I never saw a smile that looked like that in all my born days. She was the Mona Lisa and some love goddess, all rolled up in one, and the peaceful look of love in her face liked to strike me dead. She was so beautiful and they were so beautiful together, and I had a lot a' water in my eyes, for some reason. "Billy Joe" she said just above a whisper, "I'll love you all my life and even after I'm gone, but never more than now, 'cause all the love I feel right now is all a body can possible feel, cause I know there can't possibly be more, and I know from now on I am your wife." Billy Joe just put his hand up and touched her cheek and she pressed her face into his hand. He reached out and took her hands and they sat down beside each other, facin' one'nother. She started leanin' into 'em and he just leaned, real slow, on back 'till he was layin' down. She started kissin' his face all over, real tender like. Billy Joe just kept 'a whisperin' to her "I love you" over and over while she was kissin' him. It seemed like this was somethin' I prob'ly shouldn't be a' watchin' but I never did see nothin' like it before, so t'hell with it, I watched. Her mounds, I mean breasts, was pressin' into 'em real hard while she kissed on his face, and she started slidin' herself down kissin' on his chest and runnin' her tongue around 'em like she was tryin' to taste 'em all over. Pretty soon she was down there to his love post and started a runnin' her tongue all over it 'till he had himself a big ole woody. Always before she would a' planted her mouth down on that thing like she was 'bout to suck all the corn off his cob, and I'd a' had a big woody, and been runin' off to let my hand cargo off 'gainst a tree, but not this time,... not that night. This time she had that look on her like I told you before, like she was in love with his dang thing. She started real slow and just put the top of it in her mouth and looked right in his eyes, and her whole face lit up like maybe it was the most best tastin' thing she ever had in there, 'cept for her eyes. Her eyes were shootin' out love like nobody's business, and it was goin' right into his, and he was a' shootin' it right back. She was rubbin all over his belly and his hips real slow and tender like while she slid them purty lips down on him, swallowin' his whole pole easy and gentle like. She started suckin' him real slow, movin them lips up on him, then back down, while they looked at each other like I said. Next thing I know Billy Joe's slidin' 'round and gets his head 'tween those legs a' hers, and just starts akissin' and alickin' her all over 'em. I mean soon I couldn't even make out anything a' his face, just her purty butt movin' up and down a little on his head. I heard a lot 'bout muff divin' myself, but nothing' like I heard was ever like what I was a'lookin' at. She started a'moanin' and a'groanin' and her legs was a'shakin' like all get out. Soon, Billy Joe reached out and started pullin' her around and up on him, and she got over 'em like he wanted and they started starrin' at each other like they just never wanted to see nuthin' else ever again, 'cept the other's face. She had her arms out beside her as she lifted her purty butt up and sat down on 'em like it was the only thing she ever wanted in this world. I mean she sat down and his whole pole went inside her. The two a' them started makin' love so tender like, it was like they was born to do nothing' but hump on each other forever. It was so wonderful, with the moon shinin' down and the fire flickerin' and them movin together so lovin' and peaceful, the water in my eyes just spilled out and started runnin' down my cheeks. They wasn't huffin' and puffin' like other times, just lookin' love at each other, back and forth, and rockin' into each other. I swear I never did see anything like them two, just movin' like all heaven and earth didn't matter none at all, just what they was a doin'. He had his arms all around her back just feelin' and rubbin' her and sayin' he loved her and things like that. I heard her moanin' as she finally kind a' fell down on to 'em and started sort a' cryin' and pleadin' sayin' "Please, Please" over and over. When she stopped with that he rolled over on top and they just laid there lookin' at each other whisperin' lovin' things I couldn't quite make out. [b][b][b]
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24th Oct 2007
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Illinois Posts: 416
|  Re: Tallahatchie Bridge - The Real Story Dayum Cocoa I always wondered about that song. Good job, really liked this one. Thanks |
 
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24th Oct 2007
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,191
| Re: Tallahatchie Bridge - The Real Story Wow, another great one, cocoa! Loved the detail, and the romance of it. I am a romantic at heart, and this story was all that. xoxo |
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24th Oct 2007
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Eastern Pennsylvania Posts: 98
| Re: Tallahatchie Bridge - The Real Story A rollicking good yarn, Cocoa. Fun throughout. |
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Re: Tallahatchie Bridge - The Real Story That was awfully nice of you to tell the whole story as it twernt fittin for things to stay the way they was in all. It was really fun to read.
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 387
| Re: Tallahatchie Bridge - The Real Story This was really sweet way to look at ths song. I always though of as very sad song with Billy Joe dying. Nice job
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