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The Rebound
Old 8th Jun 2008 21:45
sofivaldez
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Mario was standing in front of Hectors store waiting for Esmeralda to come home from her work out. He’d asked Hector if he wanted to go play pool since he had nothing better to do on a Friday night. He really didn’t even like Hector but he’d been at his Cousin Janes’ café and he’d noticed Hector always checked out the red head that worked at the diamond shop across the street.

He’d heard about how Hector cheated on her with Jane and now the red head did all she could to piss him off by sleeping with the cute friends he brought around.

That night he’d had it all worked out, he came up with a plan to pick up Hector but his fucking truck got a flat just up the street from his apartment in the Bronx, he had to take a taxi all the way to Spanish Harlem and he was pissed the fuck off about it.

Hector came out to meet him and when he saw he’d have to drive he had to go inside and get his keys. Mario waited outside.

When he saw her all sweaty and undone he was turned on almost immediately, he never thought he’d be into a chic that he’d seen without makeup and sweaty before they had sex. This chic was different; he loved to see her flirt with all those men that went into the diamond shop, even the women admired her.

When she came close he asked, “Do you want some fries with that shake?”
She knew he was talking to her because she was the only one crazy enough to walk down that street alone at that time of night. She turned around and looked at him, trying to figure out exactly who this asshole thought he was talking to.

She looked him square in the face ready to bite his head off. “Fuck,” she thought, “this asshole doesn’t want to start this shit with me today, my PMS is going to kill his ass.” This was the worst case of PMS she’d had in months and she’d been blaming it for being a bitch all day. Fortunately she wouldn’t have to do it again tonight, when she saw his face her jaw dropped. This guy was a piece of hard candy she’d be willing to suck on no matter how sweet or sour.

After staring at him for a few minutes she turned her body completely around and walked up to him. “I don’t want fries but I’ll take a hotdog with plenty of ketchup if you don’t mind.” She had a wicked smile on her face when she said this and he loved every minute of it.

“Well”, he said, “I’d love to give you a hotdog but I’m not a big ketchup guy even with a nice and crunchy casing, how bout we go out for fries and when you run out of ketchup I’ll give you the most delicious hotdog you ever tasted.”
She licked her lips and turned to walk away without saying another word. As she reached for the door to the apartment entrance he caught her hand. When she turned to look at him his beautiful face was inches from hers and he gave her a peck on the cheek.

“Good night sleeping beauty, I hope to see you again soon.”
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Old 10th Jun 2008   #1
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Good job, sofi! It was a good read, and the details were awesome. And the sex...WOW!! Keep it up!
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Old 10th Jun 2008   #2
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Thank you... I aim to please. I hope these stories aren't too long... Well I will post again when I get a chance. Enjoy!
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Old 11th Jun 2008   #3
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That was wonderful. I am speechless. great work
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I'm impressed wonderful job....you are a great addition to this site we are lucky to have you keep up the good work
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Sofi! This was a great story! I like the Latin flavor you leave in it to spice it up. Now I have to see if I can get someone to cook me some chourizo and eggs, and if you see that Esmeralda give her my phone number!! Keep writing when you can. I love your work.
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