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Old 25th Feb 2008 15:19
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Arriving in the lodgings that she’d been provided, Sabine couldn’t help but smile to herself. Finally, at 25 years old, her dreams were starting to fall into place. Here she was at last, after all these auditions, on a 4 week run as lead dancer in a new London West End show. This was a tremendous opportunity for her. And for this young Scottish woman, 4 weeks in London was an exciting prospect.

But she was nervous, terrified even. She’d been given a gorgeous little flat to use, a welcome change after the cramped dives they normally get for several of them to share, but it was far from homely. She started settling in by placing a couple of photos of the dog, a few of hubbie Tom and their wedding which was just 10 weeks ago, her friends, and one of her newest friend… already a somewhat special friend, Claire. Claire was the latest member of their dance company, having transferred in about four months previously from a company in West Scotland. She was also in the cast for the show, also being put up in a flat somewhere. She was really looking forward to seeing her tomorrow.

Tomorrow was the big day, the first dress rehearsal run through. Where it all began. Sabine really felt the weight on her shoulders. The nerves were building the more she thought about it, and all of her efforts to read and relax were useless. There was only one thing to do at such a time… practice. Grabbing her bag with her practice gear in, she head out and made her way to the studio she’d been given keys to. She would be alone, and able to focus. Perfect. On the way there she wished Tom had come with her. He always knew just how to calm her, and there was something about fear that made Sabine surprisingly horny. An odd reaction really, she’d always thought.

Arrived and changed, Sabine went through some warming up, stretching and felt her muscles relax a little. Then she listened through the whole score, which was already firmly embedded in her memory. Imagining the moves, the steps as she went through. It was mostly modern, vibrant, high energy dancing. Nothing like the ballet she’d done as a child, these dances where sexy, and really fun. They would pass as MTV material. As she began practicing, time vanished for her, she got lost in her training, and the day rolled into the evening., without her even noticing. Sometime later, the door to the studio flew open and in walked Claire.

“Fucking hell girl, there you are! I’ve been looking everywhere!”

Sabine realised that she had no idea how long she’d been there. It could have been 1 am for all she knew. “God… sorry. Got a bit caught up in it all. What time is it?”
“Only about 9.30… but, I got here hours ago. You’re the only person I know here in London, and you go missing in action.” She was joking now, just relieved to have found Sabine.

“Sorry… I’m totally freaking out though.”

Claire gave her a hug, and tried to calm her “Don’t be silly.” She could tell she’d already been working out for some while. “You’re being a stress-head.”

Sabine loved the way Claire could always tell her that. They had met only a few weeks before Sabine and Tom’s wedding, and she’d been a nervous wreck at the time. The two became friends almost immediately, and Claire helped Sabine through the entire nightmare. Make-up, shoes, clothes, even the underwear choice had been run by her, and Claire had made it all seem easier.

“You shouldn’t over do this you know… you’ll burn out. It’s a 4 week run.”

“I know… I just want tomorrow to be perfect.”

“It will be. You’re already perfect, and you know it.”

Sabine always tried to hide how much she loved to hear that from Claire. Her relationship with Claire had been through some changes recently. At her wedding party, Claire had drunk way too much. Their friendship, only 6 weeks old or so at this point had matured fast. Predictably enough, at a dancer’s wedding there had been a lot of dancing. But when Claire and Sabine danced together, everyone watched. Sabine had only partially realised, but returning to her husband Tom, she’d found him with a raging erection.

A couple of weeks later, they finally got round to watching the video of the party, and Sabine began to understand. The eyes of everyone there had been locked on the pair. Being attractive young dancers, with a penchant for sexier, more vibrant dance styles was one thing, but above that, there was a certain energy, a spark between them. Sabine was truly surprised to see the effect that their dancing had had on everyone, and seeing it again, the effect that it had on her. On both her and Tom, in fact. It was breathtakingly arousing, seeing their bodies sway and interplay with each other really did have a certain magic to it. After only a few minutes of the video, Tom was stroking her, clearly showing his arousal, and it was only moments before Tom and her were having one of their most charged and passionate sex sessions in years. Sabine was so aroused and excited, seeing how great they looked together, how everyone has stopped and stared. The whole time as Tom fitted between her legs, her eyes just couldn’t keep away from the screen. It had all created brand new feelings in Sabine but she tried her hardest to ignore it.
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Old 26th Feb 2008   #1
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Wonderful job
It was beautifuly done and very hot
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This is a perfect example of a beautifully written sensual, erotic, seductive story. I can't praise you enough for this one.
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Old 27th Feb 2008   #3
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Oh my goodness! This was just outstanding, greedy! One of the most erotic strories I have read in a while....and I do love to dance, so now, I will never look at dancing the same again. Just a wonderful, wonderful story!
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This was a highly erotic tale. Wonderfully written and has a fabulous build to the excitement. The detail in which you write is amazing, I only hope to be able to write half as well in the future.
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Good story, good idea and a wonderful buildup
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Just flat out fantastic writing! I could not have imagined a more erotic and loving moment in dance than the whole piece was.
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As my busy winter season winds down I am looking forward to giving Mindspired more than the quick occasional peek. It was a great pleasure to have my release from hibernation greeted by such a terrificly erotic tale. I may have missed some others but Greedy, this is your best yet!
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Again and again, this story hits in all the major respects. I'd put this on my top 10 on this site. A paradigm of good writing.
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