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| As I was leaving my room in Prague’s Metamorphis Hotel the door latched behind me at exactly the same instant as the door to the next room clicked shut. Dressed for my morning run in black tights and a solid aqua colored short-sleeved Pearl Izumi running shirt, I said good morning to the man who had just emerged from the room next to mine and began down the hall. “Excuse me,” he said in lightly accented English. I stopped to look back at the tall brown-haired man who was turning his key in the lock. “Yes?” “You must lock your door with the key, it’s not automatic,” he reminded me. Oh, yeah,” Turning, I dug the key from the tiny pocket inside the waistband of my tights and locked my door. “Thanks” I said and walked to the elevator. “My pleasure”, he responded, as he followed me into the small four-person lift. He looked ridiculous. He wore an oversized orange and white long sleeved T with Rabobank printed across both front and back. Funny, I pronounced it Rob-a-bank in my head. He also had on baggy NBA style basketball shorts – orange and brown but a different, not-even-close-to-matching shade of orange – and Adidas running shoes that were white and blue. My quick assessment: super-geek! “Do you know where to go,” he asked in flawless English. “Go,” I asked. “On your run, do you have a direction?” “Nope, first day, fighting jet lag. I was going to explore…” “Follow me, if you like, I’ll take the most beautiful route I know. 5K ok?” He asked grinning broadly. “Sure,” I agreed. Prague is often called the most beautiful city in the world and this morning it was easy to understand why. The early morning sun was making the tops of the tallest buildings glow beautifully. There were red roofs atop white walls and gold highlights shimmering brightly. Many of the street lamps were still illuminated adding to the early morning sparkle. Together we jogged along the north edge of The Old Town Square to the Vitava River where a left turn sent us upstream to the Charles Bridge before looping through other parts of the Old Town district back to the Hotel. The streets were active with street cleaners, gardeners, marble polishers and delivery people. Many of them grinned broadly and waved at us.
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| Administrator Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Right where I belong!
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| Let me be the very first to say... I am impressed! Completely kept my attention during your character introduction and familiarization. You have simply done a fabulous job here and we do appreciate the submission of this gifted piece! |
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| Vintage Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Not in Kansas
Comments: 385
| Dear Rotti --- Terrific, engaging story! I love Ben's character and Jessica's "go with the flow" attitude was wonderfully refreshing even though I think she has many deeper qualities you could explore in the future. Of course the gay sadists were a surprise as was Sonia! Can't thank you enough for writing such an intriguing story. Oh, and btw, may I have the next dance? hehe Lushi |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: London - ish
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| Absolutely beautiful. Wonderfully wordy, exquisitely steamy. I didn't take my eyes from the screen for a second. Brilliant work, and a really fantastic main character. You fall totally in love with her by the end of the story. |
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| Vintage Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Not in Kansas
Comments: 385
| Just re-read this and it's still a fine piece of writing and very titillating. You did a wonderful job coming at this from a woman's perspective too! |
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| mindspired Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Detroit
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| Rotsen! What an exquisite gift you’ve offered here: skillfully described settings and characters…a plot that moves and excites…and individual scenes that tease and deliver. I’ve mentally noted the pages that really “do it” for me—for those times when one cannot indulge in the full pleasure of an entire reading. That’s right, in case of erotic deprivation go directly to p. 12 *giggles* I emphatically appeal anyone seeing this—invest the time it will take you to read this selection…you won’t be disappointed. Thanks again for sharing your art, Rotsen! xoxo, r.o.n. |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream
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| Wow!! This story was great. I stayed with it the whole time, it was like one of my romance novels....I couldn't NOT read it. Great job!! |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: East Coast
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| Thanks Rotsen for this wonderful gift of fascinating characters and amazing twist...and the best sex scene I've read since Ali's Delight! |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England
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| Such a well written, intoxicating story. I know what city I want to go to next! Felt like I was on tour for a while. The main characters were so well defined in the ways necessary to propel the length too. Not a word wasted. Just a great experience to read it. I also note the subtle awarenesses of facts seldom mentioned by others related to human sexuality, and love-making. I found myself smiling as Ben used techniques at times known to very few men. A knowledgeable and sensitive writer// :-) |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: London Area UK
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| A truly professional story, fit to grace the pages of any erotica magazine. |
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