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| His name was Ben and he spoke sparingly, just enough to point out the sights, but this he did breathing easily. Crossing the square we saw the magnificent Astronomical Clock and then, along the river, the so-called “dancing building” or “Fred and Ginger” because the architecture resembles a dancing couple. He asked if I liked to dance. I responded with a nod and a yes. He then pointed out another building saying it was the best discotheque in Prague with four floors featuring different music styles on each one. In the 40 minutes it took us to do the loop that, along with comments on a few more buildings, is about all he said. Even though he didn’t say much Ben was a good listener. He showed genuine interest in my new position with the Eastern European edition of a successful magazine for independent women. Only 24, I was fortunate to have landed a dream job like this just two years after graduating with my journalism degree. Keeping up with his pace pushed me often to shortness of breath. I still somehow managed to go on about myself. I think because I couldn’t bear the void of his silence. Later, back in my room, I realized I didn’t learn very much about Ben at all. Some journalist, I chided myself. All I could say for sure is he had nice shoulders, a nice smile and wore goofy looking clothes to run in. After a quick shower, make-up and clothes, I determined that I had plenty of time to try the continental breakfast in the hotel. Ben was already in the dining room and gestured to me to join him. In blue jeans, ivory dress shirt and black blazer he appeared considerably less geeky than he did in his running togs. The broad shoulders were still there but now it became evident he was quite lean, when he walked back to the buffet I could see he had narrow hips and no butt. From across the table his eyes were liquid cobalt. My reassessment: Handsome Viking. Missing my first chance to learn about this laconic man, I turned up my journalistic talents and conducted what amounted to an interview with a reluctant subject. It was like being on a chat room receiving only monosyllabic responses. However, I did learn that he was born in Massachusetts to an American father and a Danish mother but grew up in Copenhagen from the age of two. He attended college and graduate school in the states and he was here as a guest lecturer at the University of New York in Prague for the coming spring semester. He had only arrived the week before and had already found an apartment he would move into the next week. My first official day at the office wouldn’t be until Monday, but I went in right after breakfast to get oriented. Turned out I was given just enough time to find my desk before I received my first assignment. At 3pm I was in the waiting room of a Czech doctor who had authored yet another diet book, another variation of the low carb theme. The appointment had been made weeks earlier. My arrival in Prague allowed it to fall to me. Obviously this guy was not very high on the list if they gave it to the new girl not yet even on the payroll.
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| Comments to Story: 24 in Prague |
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| Administrator Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Right where I belong.. fo Posts: 1,002
| Let me be the very first to say... I am impressed! Completely kept my attention during your character introduction and familiarization. You have simply done a fabulous job here and we do appreciate the submission of this gifted piece! |
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| Vintage Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Not in Kansas Posts: 385
| Dear Rotti --- Terrific, engaging story! I love Ben's character and Jessica's "go with the flow" attitude was wonderfully refreshing even though I think she has many deeper qualities you could explore in the future. Of course the gay sadists were a surprise as was Sonia! Can't thank you enough for writing such an intriguing story. Oh, and btw, may I have the next dance? hehe Lushi |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: London - ish Posts: 344
| Absolutely beautiful. Wonderfully wordy, exquisitely steamy. I didn't take my eyes from the screen for a second. Brilliant work, and a really fantastic main character. You fall totally in love with her by the end of the story. |
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| Vintage Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Not in Kansas Posts: 385
| Just re-read this and it's still a fine piece of writing and very titillating. You did a wonderful job coming at this from a woman's perspective too! |
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| mindspired Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Detroit Posts: 39
| Rotsen! What an exquisite gift you’ve offered here: skillfully described settings and characters…a plot that moves and excites…and individual scenes that tease and deliver. I’ve mentally noted the pages that really “do it” for me—for those times when one cannot indulge in the full pleasure of an entire reading. That’s right, in case of erotic deprivation go directly to p. 12 *giggles* I emphatically appeal anyone seeing this—invest the time it will take you to read this selection…you won’t be disappointed. Thanks again for sharing your art, Rotsen! xoxo, r.o.n. |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,191
| Wow!! This story was great. I stayed with it the whole time, it was like one of my romance novels....I couldn't NOT read it. Great job!! |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: East Coast Posts: 21
| Thanks Rotsen for this wonderful gift of fascinating characters and amazing twist...and the best sex scene I've read since Ali's Delight! |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Such a well written, intoxicating story. I know what city I want to go to next! Felt like I was on tour for a while. The main characters were so well defined in the ways necessary to propel the length too. Not a word wasted. Just a great experience to read it. I also note the subtle awarenesses of facts seldom mentioned by others related to human sexuality, and love-making. I found myself smiling as Ben used techniques at times known to very few men. A knowledgeable and sensitive writer// :-) |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: London Area UK Posts: 8
| A truly professional story, fit to grace the pages of any erotica magazine. |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: London - ish Posts: 344
| This story is SOOOO amazingly brilliant. I haven't read it for a really long time, and must admit, the length required commitment but it's fantastically well written. The characters are excellent, the whole storyline and the play of the story is turly of professional quality. This is absolutely the benchmarking of quality story-writing for this site, and others like it. I have been writing for a few years now but have never written anything of this quality... rotsen, you are truly talented
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