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| I think I can feel every blood drop in my body, traveling through each vein.. fast. Hitting the vein end.. and coming back. Faster. My veins are pulsing.. and it's visible. My heart is pumping crazy amounts of blood. I reach you.. and I put my hands around your eyes, from the back. You slow down, all of a sudden.. and freeze. I think you know. I hear your breathing changing drastically.. and I keep my hands on your face, covering your eyes.. for a few seconds. My fingers start to spread.. to touch your nose.. your cheeks.. your mouth.. you slowly part your lips and suck the tip of my finger. We are both wet.. the rain is pouring.. and neither of us could care less. It wouldn't matter if it would snow.. or rain.. or thunder. We are away from the physical world already - we have arrived into ours. Just arrived. I lean and kiss your neck. You shiver.. and a soft moan reaches my ears. I kiss it more.. and let the rain play with our skin.. my mouth lips.. and your neck. My hands are moving.. slowly.. as I touch your neck.. and follow its lines.. your shoulders.. and then I cup your breasts. Another moan.. and more heavy breathing.. I can feel your chest.. raising.. with my hands. Your nipples are getting hard, already.. and my cock.. well.. it is asking for more and more blood. I pull you towards me.. and you feel it. Instantly. Pressing against your ass.. the cock you have thought about and imagined how would it feel like.. for weeks now. From this moment on, is yours. All yours. I move my hands more.. on your body.. and trace it.. feel your stomach.. your thighs.. your legs.. I barely touch the triangle.. warm.. and soft.. that I feel at the base of your legs. The people in the lobby or other cars are probably watching us - I couldn't care less. They do not exist anymore.. it's just me.. and you.. now. I turn you around.. and your eyes.. meet.. mine. Our breathing is heavy.. and we look at each other.. inches away. You.. and me.. [lover]. Face to face.. with your body.. pressed against mine.. your nipples.. visible.. and clearly touching me.. through our clothes.. and my cock.. fully awake.. and trying to meet you. Greet you. You feel it.. and your hips.. slowly moving against it.. confirm that. It is time.. we both decide that we have waited enough. The blood is traveling at insane speeds inside our bodies.. and this moment was too long.. craved for. Our faces get closer.. until only a pin can be put.. between our lips. Our nostrils.. wide.. inhaling the scent. Our body scent. I am getting invaded by your skin smell.. and I am sure I can hear your liquids.. dripping.. in a certain area. My mouth.. slowly parts.. and touches.. yours. Openly. Our mouths collide.. and the moves are no longer slow now. The peak is there.. and my hands.. my two hands.. are not enough.. to feel you. To rub your body. To make sex.. with my hands.. to you. Our mouths are devouring each other.. our tongues.. fight for their lives. They circle each other.. like two conscious muscles.. who want to strangle.. the other. I feel your mouth taste.. and I want more. I want more of your saliva.. more of your mouth.. more of your tongue.. more of YOU. And we kiss.. and explore.. each mouth.. becomes a familiar place.. for the other. Each tongue.. goes in.. and fills every part of our mouths.. and comes back.. retreats.. with more saliva to taste.. and mix.. your nipples are hard.. my cock is fully pulsing.. and I can tell you are warm.. and moist already.. with anticipation. I can tell your thoughts were similar to mine.. since you woke up. Minutes pass.. and we are kissing. Enjoying the feeling of us.. enjoying our newly discovered kiss.. our new taste.. enjoying us. We slow down - we are soaking wet from the rain - still going.. and.. we look into each other's eyes.. and decide it is time to go in the hotel. We don't want our friends to worry about us. It is quite late already.. and we are both smiling. A long.. happy smile.. that can barely hide our thoughts.. and our anticipation. I take your hand.. and we enter the hotel lobby, together. We spot a few curious eyes.. apparently our episode outside was closely observed. We both smile as we walk towards the reception and our hands are together.. we don't want to lose contact. Hands.. fingers.. bodies.. touching each other, naturally, with slow moves.. caressing each other on bare skin.. or clothes.. and all these moves saying the same: I want you. NOW.
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| Comments to Story: Our Journey - part 1 |
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| Administrator Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Right where I belong.. fo Posts: 1,002
| Mmmm - as always - very intense and so erotic. You sure have a way with words - I wonder, are you like this in person? I bet you're a great lover! |
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| Vintage Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Not in Kansas Posts: 385
| zoundsy ..... Your best effort of all. Thank you! -- lushi |
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| Vintage Author Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 362
| Hi Lily, I think you _will_ win the bet. Clearly. .. and.. completely. Far. MSounds |
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| Vintage Author Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 362
| Hi Lushi, Hmm 'best effort'? Sounds like a challenge.. should I do something about it, I wonder? [self-posing question] MSounds P.S. You're welcome! |
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| Administrator Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Right where I belong.. fo Posts: 1,002
| Had to come back and read this again - and again. If it were me - I think I would hope for NO rain - but understand the significance in the story. Wondering ... did you meet? And... did it go as you envisioned? or is it still a juicy fantasy? |
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| Vintage Author Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 362
| Greetings Lily, Actually - both. And.. of course - three things happened.. 1. Did meet - and it was not like I had envisioned it [due to circumstances neither of us were able to control] [well, we could have but.. neither of us really wanted to plan or.. anything - I just.. went to her - in a heartbeat]. 2. It's still a very juicy [literally, too!] [from both angles!!] plan.. which _WILL_ happen. It has to. There has been a continuous.. and quite long.. intense period - for us both.. and - we _need_ to make this story - true. And again. And more. .. and.. keep going.. for as long as we can breathe.. and we have energy left.. in our bodies. and.. 3. Maybe I shall keep you updated on this.. somehow? MSounds |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| So powerful...so intense....the speech....borders on the paratactical....amazing piece. MS, you leave me .....without words.
__________________ "Its not easy, being green...but green's the color of Spring...it's beautiful, and I think it's what I wanna be." (Kermit the frog) |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: London - ish Posts: 344
| This is just brilliant. All that impatience and passion and need... and they hadn't even got into the hotel room yet... man alive, I really LOVED this story. Great work.
__________________ Aimez moi tous, les uns et les autres. |
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