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Story Night
Old 29th Jan 2010 08:45
angiewalkerblue
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Billy sat uncomfortably on the settee facing Jake. Apart from the fact that he had only just met him, their meeting had also been thrust upon him by his wife Suzy. Having casually dropped it into the conversation at the end of dinner, she had given him only fifteen minutes notice before the doorbell rang and in stepped Jake. But that was Suzy all over, suddenly thrusting things upon people and catching them by surprise.





If there was one thing she could not accuse him of after almost five years of marriage was that he took her for granted. She never gave him the chance. Suzy was the type of girl that lived on the instant, if she wanted something she would go for it there and then. It had only been six months ago that she announced that she was fed up with the house they had bought a year earlier; two months later they were installed in a new home. Suzy had arranged the sale of the old home and the purchase of the new one all within six weeks and it was only now that Billy was starting to relax and enjoy their new surroundings. For all her unpredictability though, he adored her. Suzy was sexy and vibrant as well as very attractive. With their new home came a new four poster bed, Suzy’s idea again. It had been well used.





“So what do you think of Suzy’s writings then?” Jake asked him.





This had been the purpose of their meeting, to discuss Suzy’s stories. Suzy wrote erotica. Once again she had caught him by surprise by thrusting this side of her life upon him a few months previously. It had shocked him but not put him off. Her stories were arousing; descriptively filthy; shocking and surprising and they had excited him. Also there was the way that she would sometimes present them to him that made them even more enjoyable. A few nights earlier she came to him as he relaxed watching television, naked except for a sheer black negligee, waving a sheaf of papers in her hand. As he sat and read the short story she unzipped him and took his erection in her hand. Billy managed to get to the part where the husband had just lifted his wife’s legs onto the shoulders of the man positioning himself between her thighs. Her hand reached down to his and pushed it gently towards the other man’s penis. “Guide him into me darling.” She said softly. It was that vision of a man taking hold of another man’s erection and guiding into his wife’s pussy that sent him over the edge. His cum splashed over the pages and covered his groin as his cock pulsated in her hand. Suzy could masturbate him like no other girl had done before.





“They are good……very good.” He replied nervously as he began to wonder what the purpose of all this was and why she had left the two of them to talk alone.





“I hope you don’t mind but I have been giving her some details of my experiences as a ‘Bull’.”





Billy knew that she had been chatting to people on the internet about their sexual experiences using the material for her stories and Billy knew what the term ‘bull’ meant as well. He began to feel a little intimidated being in the presence of a man who ‘serviced’ other men’s wives. Billy nervously shook his head.




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Old 1st Mar 2010   #1
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Angie, Angie, Angie - I have read several of your stories and consider you a superb author, bright and inventive, one of the best storytellers I have read.

I waited for someone to comment on this one since it was posted, and no one has. So, I will.

I read it the first time two days ago - had to read it twice because I just didn't get it. Waited untill today to read it again - still don't get it.

The premise is similar to one of yours on "LL" when a wife repays her husband for infidelity, but that one is absolutely excellent, well thought out, well described, good developed characters - this one does not measure up, the characterization makes no sense, their actions and reactions are irrational, and the action in the storyline is confusing.

I can't seem to get why you wrote this, unless it was intended to purely offend.

You are better than this. Sometimes, we, as authors just need to hit the delete button on our word processors.

Sorry.
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