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Old 29th Jan 2010 08:45
angiewalkerblue
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“So what’s your take on all this then?” He asked. “You know, a husband allowing his wife to have sex with other men.”





“It……….it’s………..it’s not something that I would be interested in.”





Jake adjusted himself on the settee, sitting almost sideways on facing Billy and relaxing with his right arm resting on the back of the settee.





“Some guys get a real kick out of it Billy.” Jake told him. “The mixture of jealousy and sexual excitement can get the adrenaline really flowing in a man.”





Billy said nothing.





“You like the stories though don’t you?” Jake asked him.





Billy’s intimidation began to grow as he came under Jake’s scrutiny. Jake was a big man and he seemed to fill the stereotype black male lover that filled Suzy’s stories. There was nothing spectacularly attractive about him but he knew that women would be turned on by his dominant masculinity. He could sense that a woman being bedded by Jake would know that she had been with a real man. Billy suddenly realised that he was gazing down at Jake’s crotch and turned away in embarrassment.





“The stories Billy?”





“Yes…..yes they are good.”





“Suzy tells me that you get quite excited reading them.” Jake told him.





Now he was beginning to feel very nervous.





“It’s nothing to feel ashamed about, you know, wanting to have your wife fucked by another man Billy.” Jake told him. “I know some guys start off feeling very guilty about their feelings but it’s more common than you think. I always find that sitting and talking to a guy beforehand, getting issues out of the way, goes a long way to making things as relaxing and enjoyable as possible for all concerned.”





“Is…..is this why you are here?” Billy asked him.





“Why do you think I am here Billy?” Jake asked him.





“I….I…..I don’t know. I knew nothing about it until half and hour ago.”





“Yes Billy I do want to fuck your wife. She’s very attractive and I would imagine a great shag as well, so what man wouldn’t want to fuck her. Suzy also wants me to fuck her; wants me to help her out with a fantasy of hers, but first of all let’s get your needs attended to first.”





“I don’t have any needs.” Billy told him.





“I’ve been in this game for years Billy so I know how to read guys like you, also Suzy knows you better than you think.” Jake told him.





“I’ve never talked about this with Suzy.” Billy told him.





“You have told her that it turned you on though.” Jake said.





“But I have never said I wanted to do it though.”





Jake smiled. “That’s how it starts Billy. A fantasy then reality.”





“But I love my wife. I don’t want to see another man fuck her.” Billy said adamantly.





Jake smiled again and this time reached out and patted Billy’s knee. “Of course you love your wife and I know she loves you but……….isn’t there just a teeny weeny bit of excitement there in thinking of her with another man.”





Billy said nothing.





“You see Billy I can read guys pretty quickly; you have to in this game.
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Old 1st Mar 2010   #1
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Angie, Angie, Angie - I have read several of your stories and consider you a superb author, bright and inventive, one of the best storytellers I have read.

I waited for someone to comment on this one since it was posted, and no one has. So, I will.

I read it the first time two days ago - had to read it twice because I just didn't get it. Waited untill today to read it again - still don't get it.

The premise is similar to one of yours on "LL" when a wife repays her husband for infidelity, but that one is absolutely excellent, well thought out, well described, good developed characters - this one does not measure up, the characterization makes no sense, their actions and reactions are irrational, and the action in the storyline is confusing.

I can't seem to get why you wrote this, unless it was intended to purely offend.

You are better than this. Sometimes, we, as authors just need to hit the delete button on our word processors.

Sorry.
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