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That weekend in Vegas (Page 2)
Old 7th Nov 2007 03:00
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Whitney knew why she said yes, but it kind of surprised her how fast it came out of her mouth. She realized if she had taken time to think about it, she never would have let him come up to her room. Within moments, her thoughts still racing, she heard a knock at the door. She opened the door and for a moment they both just stood there looking into each others eyes. Then without a word she was in his arms. He reached out and touched her face, and then he kissed her softly gently sucking on her lower lip. He felt her hands in his hair, then down his sides and inside his shirt as she pulled it over his head. She kissed Michaels neck then began to bite it softly as she guided him into the room. She tried to shove him onto the bed, but he pulled her to him and slowly ran his hands up her legs and under her dress. He kissed her stomach as he pushed the dress up over her breasts and finally over her head. The rekindled passion between them was felt as their lips met again. As their embrace continued, he caressed her cheek. His hands glided over her skin like silk, trailing down her neck and over her shoulders. He broke the kiss and looked into her passion filled eyes as he began to undo her bra. She slid her hands down his chest as the clasps were being undone and unbuttoned his pants.

As the straps of her bra began to slide down her arms, she hooked her thumbs into his boxers and pressed the three articles of clothing to the floor. Then she took him into her mouth as far as she could, sliding her wet warm lips up and down his cock. She changed the pace by rolling her tongue around the head licking and kissing it until his legs began to tense and quiver. He pulled her up to him and bit her neck and kissed his way to her breasts. Her nipples were already hard but he took each one in his mouth kissing, licking and sucking on them, making them harder still.

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Old 7th Nov 2007   #1
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Well I could have done without the choice in font... but....

I really liked this story... it seems your mind is more inspired then you let on. Would love to see what else comes from that mind of yours.... You are just as imaginative today as you were 7 yrs ago.
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Old 7th Nov 2007   #2
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Umm, not bad Shy..uhhh be right back.

Ok now that I grabbed a cold shower, like I was saying, not bad. It was a pleasure to read and re read again.

Serious, great story and you did a good job with showing the lingering fire that can exist over time.

Thank you
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Old 7th Nov 2007   #3
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Great story, Shy!! I liked that way you made people see that some feelings can still linger, even after going separate ways. And, the sex was yummy! Keep it up!!
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Old 9th Nov 2007   #4
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I don't know what happened to the original font... but this is much - MUCH better!

Great story Shy! WOW! I knew you had it in you... you shy little erotic devil! Keep up the good work!
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Old 4th Dec 2007   #5
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Really liked this story Shy. Vividly described and beautifully created. Excellent work.
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Old 6th Dec 2007   #6
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Shy,

Very sweet story.. Seems like we have some things in common.. other that sucking good cock! :-)

Keep it up and be daring!

Greetings,
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A sweet recollection and moment of rebirth....great writing style that made some subtle feelings lucid---no easy task. I'd love a sequel myself. Good job sweet lady!
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Here months later I reread this story as it was great the first time. Whitney is quite a beautifully developed character.
It is interesting how at first she wants to hide but he let's her know he wants her in his life as he always has, and she is taken by that. Each event shows their characters to be human and endearing, charmed by each other (love), and
happy to have each other.
The writing style is really clear and efficient. No terse, hard to understand phrases or sections. It was an easy flow that gives it a chance to let the charm of the plot line develop unencumbered.
I know I enjoyed this read more than the first.
Thank you for sharing you considerable talents with us Shy.
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