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The Cabin (Page 2)
Old 31st Dec 2009 20:32
Gypsy
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As you can see I have wine," she walked towards the kitchen, “think might have some beer in the fridge, or I can make some coffee.”


"Whatever, I'm easy." He followed her into the kitchen. "So is… um-m, is Adam around?"


"No he isn't." Sandra kept her back to him, and then hung her head adding "He left me a year ago, divorce was final today."


He hated she was hurting, taking her arm, turning her around, and holding her close to his body. She slips her arms around his back laying her head on his chest. Matthew couldn’t help but think how well they fit together. He let out a bit of a growl, planting a kiss on the top of her head, then using his hands he tilted her head kissing her forehead.


Eyes closed Sandra felt him gently kiss her eyelids, and then his lips were on hers she sighed and moaned as she slipped her tongue in his mouth. She felt that familiar tug inside her stomach as Matthew’s tongue slid into her mouth.


He slipped his hands under her sweater her skin soft and smooth under his hands. They glided up to her breast, where her nipples were like stones. She slipped her hand down his pants feeling a good size bulge, before starting to undo his belt, then pants. Matthew ran his hands to her jeans, pushing them down, taking the panties with them.


Sandra kicked off her jeans and panties, while pushing his pants down. She ran her fingers through his hair, kissing him deeply.


She broke the kiss. "Let’s go the bedroom."


"Later," Matthew growled. He kissed her, jabbing his tongue deep in her mouth.


She grabbed his hair, wrapping one of her legs around his. He grabbed her other leg wrapping it around him and with one solid thrust slid into her wet entrance, filling her completely. She tightly clung to him as they fell against the wall, while kissing each other hard. Sandra still had a handful of his hair the other hand under his sweater, her nails digging deep into his back.


Matthew grabbed her hair, pulling her head to the side taking a bite of her neck all the while thrusting hard and fast into her. This went on for what seemed like hours as they moan, groan, bite, and kiss each other, scratching and pawing till they came together, hard.


He gently brushed her hair from her face, placing a tender kiss on her lips.


She kissed him back, rubbing his back, her legs slide down off his hips. They look at each other knowing this was just the beginning.


"I want to see the rest of you” Matthew said sliding out of her.


"I’ll show you mine, you show me yours." She chuckled knowing full well it sounded corny, but didn’t care. She took off her sweater and bra, throwing them to the floor.


"I think we played this game before." He laughed, kicking off his pants and shrugging out of his sweater.


She swatted him snickering. "Doesn't count we were ten."


"True," he pulled her to him kissing her, "this is much better."


He scooped her up, carrying her to the living room, placing her on the floor in front of the fire. Picking up the wine glass he dipped his fingers in, grazing her lips with the wet fingers.
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Old 15th Jan 2010   #1
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The cabin, well done Gypsy, an emotion packed story with an easy flowing style. I enjoyed this tale very much. I especially liked the gripping entry paragraph and smooth flashback into the story. Well, done Gypsy, I’m looking forward to your next story.
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The cabin, well done Gypsy, an emotion packed story with an easy flowing style. I enjoyed this tale very much. I especially liked the gripping entry paragraph and smooth flashback into the story. Well, done Gypsy, I’m looking forward to your next story.
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Old 15th Jan 2010   #3
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Sometimes I read something and I feel like saying "Mmmmmmmmmm, nice." I felt this way after reading this, Gypsy. It's my kind of story. I got to meet your girl and find out some of how she thought and felt. You drew me into her life, and my heart went out to her.

The hot parts were good too. You didn't write a lot of description of either character or how they made love, and I like that. You let me build the image of them in my mind as I thought they might be.

Well done. Keep writing. You'll only get better.

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I enjoyed reading your well-thought-out story. Your images were vivid, and I felt I was a spectator inside your scene. I loved the interplay of your characters, and you made them all so very real for my imagination. You tell a wonderful story and I look forward to reading more from you soon.
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I see a continuance in this story's future! Well done.
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Old 19th Jan 2010   #6
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very enjoyable and sensual. fully of great imagery and the story plays out perfectly. it all happened a littlesuddenly, but I actually found that added to the appeal here. this is great Gypsy, I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Loved the concept of the story. A little bit more detail would be good, but all in all, it was a good story. Can't wait for part 2. :-)
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Well now didn't this story ever take a turn for the better?
It was hot and could get hotter with more delicious detail.
We want more! lol
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