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| The Cabin (Page 3) |
 31st Dec 2009 19:32
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| He kissed her, tasting the wine, then broke the kiss, getting a loud groan from her. Matthew dipped his finger back into the wine, tracing her hard nipples lazily, then lick and sucks each one slowly. Sandra moaned arching her back, running her hands through his hair pushing him farther down to her aching pussy. Taking the hint he kisses his way down to her mound, and then licks her pussy taking each lip in his mouth enjoying the taste both of them on her. "I want to taste you to please,” she pleads. He rolled on his back; she turned, lying on top of him, grabbing hold of his beautiful hard dick giving it a squeeze. She ran her tongue over the top of his head, down him, back up, then sucking him hard. She felt one then two fingers inside her while he sucked on her clit she moaned deeply sending vibrations through his dick. She began to move her hips back and forth all the while rubbing his balls. The attention he was giving her pussy was beginning to be too much so she stopped sucking him, but kept a hand wrapped around his shaft. "Matthew I need you inside me please." She turned around as he released her, and kissed him deeply, then he spun her to where they were spooning. He slipped his hard dick into her, running his hand over her breasts and kissing her on the neck. Sandra turned her head to kiss him, placing her hand on his helping play with her nipples, enjoying both of they're hands. She began to buck against him slowly enjoying his width and length He groaned deeply, running his hand down to her clit making small circles slowly then pick up the pace she bucked faster, harder. Her muscles clamped down on him as she began to cum hard, shaking and quivering she grabbed his hair and kissed him hard as his hot cum filled her. Matthew held her close and gave her a quick kiss, and then tenderly she kissed him back, lingering longer. He stroked her hair as her breathing became more relax, then she fell asleep and he watched her before drifting off to sleep.
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15th Jan 2010
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|  Re: The Cabin The cabin, well done Gypsy, an emotion packed story with an easy flowing style. I enjoyed this tale very much. I especially liked the gripping entry paragraph and smooth flashback into the story. Well, done Gypsy, I’m looking forward to your next story. |
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15th Jan 2010
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: In the Fantasy Forest Posts: 346
|  Re: The Cabin The cabin, well done Gypsy, an emotion packed story with an easy flowing style. I enjoyed this tale very much. I especially liked the gripping entry paragraph and smooth flashback into the story. Well, done Gypsy, I’m looking forward to your next story.
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15th Jan 2010
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Tennessee Posts: 232
| Re: The Cabin Sometimes I read something and I feel like saying "Mmmmmmmmmm, nice." I felt this way after reading this, Gypsy. It's my kind of story. I got to meet your girl and find out some of how she thought and felt. You drew me into her life, and my heart went out to her. The hot parts were good too. You didn't write a lot of description of either character or how they made love, and I like that. You let me build the image of them in my mind as I thought they might be. Well done. Keep writing. You'll only get better. Ravenquill |
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18th Jan 2010
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| Moderator  Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Frolicking in the woods. Posts: 1,556
| Re: The Cabin I enjoyed reading your well-thought-out story. Your images were vivid, and I felt I was a spectator inside your scene. I loved the interplay of your characters, and you made them all so very real for my imagination. You tell a wonderful story and I look forward to reading more from you soon.
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18th Jan 2010
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: AZ Posts: 13
| Re: The Cabin I see a continuance in this story's future! Well done. |
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19th Jan 2010
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: London - ish Posts: 344
| Re: The Cabin very enjoyable and sensual. fully of great imagery and the story plays out perfectly. it all happened a littlesuddenly, but I actually found that added to the appeal here. this is great Gypsy, I look forward to reading more of your work.
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26th Jan 2010
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,191
| Re: The Cabin Loved the concept of the story. A little bit more detail would be good, but all in all, it was a good story. Can't wait for part 2. :-)
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1st Mar 2010
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Re: The Cabin Well now didn't this story ever take a turn for the better? It was hot and could get hotter with more delicious detail. We want more! lol
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