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| Your hair smells so fresh and clean, the scent of your skin is so singularly yours and so excitingly fresh. I am as excited by you as I have ever been about any woman. I need you. I am drunk with you. I must have you. As the song plays softly now, you look up to me and say, “Hey there cowboy, I have been waiting for you to ask me to dance all evening. What took you so long?” I am on the spot but tell the truth as best I can. I hold your arms as you place your hands on my chest to my delight and say, “Well, sweet thang, I’m just a hired hand on this old farm and ranch here, and I never thought you’d ever accept.” You reply in astonished surprise, “and I suppose I look like a city slicker in these boots, and this denim skirt? C’mon handsome, let me show you a thing or two about me!” Then you tell me not to move, run to the band and say something to the ‘harp’ player who nods and smiles with a twitch of his mouth and you return to me beaming. The music soon stops and the lead singer says, “I have a special request here from a sweet lil’ Miss for Bill Monroe’s “Kentucky Waltz.” You are beaming and ask me, “Do you know how to waltz big guy?” “Why, no, I don’t s’ppose I do” I admit. “Then I’m going to teach ya how to do it then!” To be honest about this here moment, if I wasn’t in love with you before that lesson, I sure was by its end! Or at least something very close to it! The band played in sweet blue-grass tones and I followed your lead as you whispered “…and a one, two, three, one two three….,” moving your feet in a kind of rectangle: We were waltzing that night in Kentucky Beneath the beautiful harvest moon And I was the boy that was lucky But it all ended too soon As I sit alone in the moonlight I see your smiling face And I long once more for your embrace In the beautiful Kentucky waltz By the time it is over, I lean in and kiss your lips sweetly. You respond in kind encouraging me. Your lovely breast is already heaving and I know you find me to your liking. As much as my mind says “this can’t be,” my intuition says “it is.” We are both soaking each other up as we seem so recklessly ready to throw ourselves into each other. You ask me my name and I say “Will” and you say “I’m Suzannah Jo but my friends call me ‘Suzy.’” I look into your smiling face and say, “Well I’ll be! I would have thought they’d have called you ‘sunshine’ or ‘princess!’” You look up at me with the sincerest, most melting eyes and say, “Aw Will! That’s so sweet!” Then you hold back a bit and ask rhetorically, “You sure you’re a hired hand...and not just a lady’s man with that sweet talk?”
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| Comments to Story: The Hay Loft |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 44
| Hmmm okay if I wasn't aroused before I am now. You are a fantastic story teller. You had me from the very beginning and even though I had things to do I just had to finish reading it. I look forward to reading more.
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: the shadows Posts: 390
| Nice work D, I thought you said you couldn't write a hot story. Well you did here |
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| Chat Moderators Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Dover , De Posts: 1,392
| Wow Dion ...... I'm really impressed ..... nice work ...romantic and sexy ... well done....*smile*
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Jacksonville, NC Posts: 43
| Amazing Dionysius, Had me enthralled from start to finish. You're an excellent writer and I especially like the flow of the writing. Great Job
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Australia & UK Posts: 26
| Very well written and very arousing. Can I have the next dance please........... |
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| mindspired Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 2
| Great story! |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
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Angie, yes you certainly may!!.....:-) *fans himself* lol
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| Moderator Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Frolicking in the woods. Posts: 1,556
| What an atmospheric, and incredibly romantic story. The descriptions were so vivid and I was able to understand the connection between your characters as if I were one of them. The words flowed smoothly from the start of your beautiful romance to the very last word. You write beautifully.
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