A Sight to See

LustyKate · 6th Apr 2007

Lily....this story was both emotionally moving and excitingly erotic. You truly have a way with words and they always find their way into my heart and into my pants. =) Thank you so much for such a beautiful story. I can only hope that someday we can actually act it out. The connection that is felt in this story is very moving. =*) I hope to see some similar stories to come.

Much love,
~Kate~

LustyKate · 6th Apr 2007

I read it again and love it even more! You've done such a wonderful job love. =)

I'm sure that strap-on will bring us many memories indeed!

msounds · 6th Apr 2007

Greetings Lily,

Very intense - as I expected.

Some of the elements inside are - so - real..

Thank you.

Here,
MSounds

cabinboy · 7th Apr 2007

Wow Lily, another blockbuster from you. I would love to have you cook for me, oh yeah and kitchen sex, mmmmmmmmm

kittykat · 10th Apr 2007

Okay....have you been reading my mind?? I have had one of these fantasies for a long time and wow....such intensity! I would love to have you cook for me and do those things to me, Lily. And, picturing you and Kate with that strap-on is enough to make me swallow my tongue...mmmmmmmmmmmm

Rotsen · 11th Apr 2007

Nicely, done. An exciting and erotic rollercoaster ride.

runeblade · 15th Apr 2007

Very well done. I think writing in the present tense is quite challenging but you can do it and shine!

firefightinangel · 3rd May 2007

Intense yet the eroticism of it all comes forth...you always know how to catch the eye as well as the thoughts Lily...I love reading all your work!! Leaves me forever wanting more...

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silverfox · 28th May 2007

good one lilly,as always,and if kittykat and yourself want to share a meal one evening,i'll buy the groceries.....and the film for the camera,LOL :-)

cocoa2 · 3rd Oct 2007

Great write Lilly.

Soon all women will have learned what men have known since the dawn of time, how wonderful pussy really tastes. Then where will we be.

6th Apr 2007	#1
LustyKate mindspired Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 41	Re: A Sight to See Lily....this story was both emotionally moving and excitingly erotic. You truly have a way with words and they always find their way into my heart and into my pants. =) Thank you so much for such a beautiful story. I can only hope that someday we can actually act it out. The connection that is felt in this story is very moving. =*) I hope to see some similar stories to come. Much love, ~Kate~

6th Apr 2007	#2
LustyKate mindspired Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 41	Re: A Sight to See I read it again and love it even more! You've done such a wonderful job love. =) I'm sure that strap-on will bring us many memories indeed!

6th Apr 2007	#3
msounds Vintage Author Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 362	Powerful.. and so vivid Greetings Lily, Very intense - as I expected. Some of the elements inside are - so - real.. Thank you. Here, MSounds

7th Apr 2007	#4
cabinboy Inspired Author Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 411	Re: A Sight to See Wow Lily, another blockbuster from you. I would love to have you cook for me, oh yeah and kitchen sex, mmmmmmmmm

10th Apr 2007	#5
kittykat Inspired Author Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,191	Re: A Sight to See Okay....have you been reading my mind?? I have had one of these fantasies for a long time and wow....such intensity! I would love to have you cook for me and do those things to me, Lily. And, picturing you and Kate with that strap-on is enough to make me swallow my tongue...mmmmmmmmmmmm

11th Apr 2007	#6
Rotsen Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Eastern Pennsylvania Posts: 98	Re: A Sight to See Nicely, done. An exciting and erotic rollercoaster ride.

15th Apr 2007	#7
runeblade Vintage Author Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 4	Re: A Sight to See Very well done. I think writing in the present tense is quite challenging but you can do it and shine!

3rd May 2007	#8
firefightinangel Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Clitterville Posts: 164	Re: A Sight to See Intense yet the eroticism of it all comes forth...you always know how to catch the eye as well as the thoughts Lily...I love reading all your work!! Leaves me forever wanting more... int:

28th May 2007	#9
silverfox mindspired Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: glasgow,scotland Posts: 52	Re: A Sight to See good one lilly,as always,and if kittykat and yourself want to share a meal one evening,i'll buy the groceries.....and the film for the camera,LOL :-)

3rd Oct 2007	#10
cocoa2 Inspired Author Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 35	Re: A Sight to See Great write Lilly. Soon all women will have learned what men have known since the dawn of time, how wonderful pussy really tastes. Then where will we be.