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Old 6th Sep 2007 08:00
jillbaby
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My first reaction to his words was shock not just at his arrogance, but also at his ability to sense my arousal. It was as if he had me under some kind of spell. My will continued to desert me, and I felt strangely helpless. I was fascinated that he seemed to know how I was feeling - how my lust was building. It was as if he could control me by knowing my secret sluttish fantasies, and how to fulfil them. On my daily train commutes, I often fantasised about sex on the train, but usually pictured it in a toilet. In fact, sometimes my imagination got me so excited, that I had to go into a toilet to play with myself.

I realised that, as we stood huddled in the corner by the door, our backs to anyone passing, it would look as if we were two lovers embracing. His arm eased its grip but continued to encircle my waist, while the other hand moved back to a breast. The stranger began a slow, sensuous kneading motion on my breast. I felt my nipple stiffen further as he somehow managed to pinch it through my blouse and bra. My wetness was increasing, and the blood was surging in my clit. His erection pressed insistently into my back, as he loomed over me. I closed my eyes, wanting more - wanting him to touch more than just my breast.

"Unbutton your blouse," he whispered in the same soft but commanding tone that he had used before. I hesitated, torn between desire and common sense. Suddenly, the kneading stopped. "Unbutton your blouse for me now!" he hissed commandingly, his body moulded to mine. I glanced over my shoulder, and saw that we were still alone. I desperately wanted to feel his touch again. As if in a dream, my hand moved to the buttons of my blouse and slowly unbuttoned three of them to just below my bra. His hand reached inside the blouse and pushed my bra up over my breasts. As it brushed past my erect nipple, a gasp escaped me at the electric tingle it sent down my spine. Then I felt a twinge of panic. What on earth was happening to me? My thoughts were swept away when his fingers began caressing my naked breast, gently rolling the hard nipple between his warm fingers. Without any conscious intention, I began gently rotating my buttocks against his hard-on, as we swayed to the motion of the train. My eyes were closed, and my face pressed against the coolness of the door window, while I breathed heavily through my open mouth. I was now in the grip of uncaring lust, more so than I had been for a long time. The physical pleasure from his caresses was intensified by the excitement of being felt-up by a total stranger in public. My panties were becoming very wet as my aroused pussy started to leak. I felt that familiar need to have something big and hard inside me, thrusting and pounding. Deep down I wanted him just to throw me to the floor and take me there and then, even as I realised how ridiculous that was.

My clit had become more and more swollen until I felt I might come just from his playing with my nipple. And then he stopped! But after a second or two, I heard that demanding, confident whisper again. "Tell me what you want me to do." I stiffened with shock at how bold this man was. I wanted to say the words, and yet...

"If you don't tell me, I'll stop what I am doing. You don't want that do you?"

My heart sank at his words. I desperately needed more. My body was screaming for more.

Why was this man so able to bend me to his will? I moaned softly in surrender, and turned my head towards him. I was trembling at the way he made me want what he was offering.

"Touch me." I whispered softly - almost too quietly to be heard. But I had said it - to my amazement.

"What?" His voice was taunting. I knew that he had heard, but I felt compelled to reply. "Please, touch me," I said a little louder.

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Old 6th Sep 2007   #1
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A most interesting tale Jill. I really liked the way it built up as well as the public display. The ending was great with possibilities left to the imagination as well as follw-up stories.

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Old 6th Sep 2007   #2
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Different... and in a very good way.

This is a great story. And the visuals; the descriptions, the mental images are really clear and vivid.

Really exciting, and naughty. Thrilling the whole way through.
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Old 6th Sep 2007   #3
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I have not had much opportunity to indulge my Mindspired habit lately, but I am glad I took the time to read "Mesmerised".

This is not only a good story, it is good storytelling.


PSIs that how you spell mesmerized in England?)
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Old 17th Nov 2007   #4
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I realiZe that the Americans have made some logical alterations to the English language. But I am surpriZed that even those wiZe guys, have some difficulty in deciding how to formuliZe the rule. Or perhaps I am not enterpriZing enough to work it out LOL

Anyway, as long as we understand each other :-D
Thanks Rotsen
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Old 17th Nov 2007   #5
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Thank you Night. Coming from you, that is praise indeed.
I have thought about some follow-up scenarios, but decided to leave it as a short one.
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Old 18th Nov 2007   #6
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Jillbaby I can see now where Rotsen got his inspiration. One great, well told story with beautiful action, I liked it, I liked it alot.
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Old 22nd Nov 2007   #7
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Wow another prick hardening tale, fantastic! I read your Halloween story yesterday so I had to read the others. How do you think of these ideas?

Keep it up! You certainly keep me up!! :-)
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"But it felt so amazingly good to surrender to him."

So that is what happens on subways??? Here I thought they were vehicles of transportation that took you to far away places you wanted to go to....you have a masterful way of describing the thrill of digital entry as part of a whole event that surrounds you in your stories. This was a really good one
even by your standards Jill.
Always a thrill!!
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once again jill, your stories always seem to stimulate me..keep up the great work
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Nice Jill, naughty and nice and oozing creative juices. I'll bet her girlfriends will never believe this story. Still, I'd tell them about it any way just in case they take the train and run into my buddy themselves. He certainly knows how to show a girl a good time. Nice, naughty story telling Jill.
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