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| Outside looking in (Page 2) |
 6th Nov 2010 14:01
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| So he focused on her again, instead of the uncomfortable tightness in his pants and watched her flatten her hands and rub her palms over her erect nipples. She was so sensitive and he could see her nipples tighten with each circular motion. Slowly he undid his zipper...he could at least give himself some more room...but he would try to save himself...he needed her to feel what she did to him. She opened her eyes and he could see that they were dark with arousal. He wanted to plunge deep into her and see her eyes turn to dark wells with emotion. He was lost in those eyes, so much so that he almost missed her hands journey down over those full hips. Under the lacy band he could see that she was teasing the skin just around it. Over the hips, across the tummy....teasing rubbing and then a very slow and deliberate rub straight to her heat filled core. Was she going to make him imagine what her hand was doing under those panties. Seeing the mound her hand made but not being able to see each beautiful stroke...if she were touching her clit...or her pink wet slit.... But no, this was a show after all, and what was a show if you didn’t get to see all of the action? And what a good actress she was. He could tell she was vey aroused since she simply lowered her panties just above her knees...or maybe she liked the way they kept her partially constricted. That was it...the thought of him gliding into her while she was bound made him dizzy. He had to stroke himself...but just a little because tonight was definitely going to be the night he took her with as much passion as she gave in her shows. He matched his strokes to her finger strokes....her whole hand was placed over her mound...legs spread as far as her panties would allow her... and she had her middle finger slowly gliding up and down her very wet lips...up over her clit and back into her ruby lips. He could see how wet she was from where he was watching and couldn’t wait to feel that over his waiting cock. Taste her after he had her....soon. She took her time...building up the pressure...he could see her muscles tighten across her tummy and her hips raise up off the bed. Not only was she teasing him...she was teasing herself....He watched her quicken the pace and slide two fingers into her wetness and out quickly over her nub. Almost frantically she used her other hand to open her lips up wide for him...so he could see everything. See how now she was just focusing on her swollen clit. Just when he thought she was ready to explode she slowed her pace. Surely this couldn’t be it. He couldn’t imagine this being the end of the story. Tonight he would finish her show for her and was almost ready to make his move when she rolled over to her tummy. Her ass was full and round but from this position it looked as if she were going to sleep. But slowly she pulled her knees up under her, placed her cheek on the sheets and spread her legs. This couldn’t be happening. He had always thought of her like this, ass in the air, where he could plunge into her so deeply.
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12th Nov 2010
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| Moderator  Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Frolicking in the woods. Posts: 1,556
|  Re: Outside looking in Very very nicely done! It took me a little bit to figure out that he is imagining that she puts on her show just for him, in his head. The pacing was perfect and you build up the suspense of the action very sweetly. You are a good writer and I hope to see more stories from you, Ruby! Thanks for an enjoyable read.
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15th Nov 2010
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: London - ish Posts: 344
| Re: Outside looking in A clever little story! Well done, I really like this. It was well written and the gentle progression from sounding like a romance piece to a kind of melancholy voyeur situation is really well handled. An excellent piece of writing.
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29th Nov 2010
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| mindspired Member  Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 70
| Re: Outside looking in Thanks Pepper and Greedy...it took me a bit of courage to post and your comments help a lot  |
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23rd Mar 2011
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
|  Re: Outside looking in Ruby, Congratulations on your very special story! It was so sweetly presented. We so often say "girl of my dreams" but do not spell that out. This story does just that and so sweetly. I liked the emphasis on the way in which she stroked herself in every phase of her rise to climax....the softly brushing of the nipples, her showing off her nipples to him, but mostly the special way she she played with her pussy. She broke it down into "stages" sort of, first the wet fingers, the panties band, etc., then the movements from rubbing outside to inside, inside to outside in a lovely fluidity so few are good at. All subtle details few notice but smoothly worked into your story. Finally, I loved the way you emphasized her truthfulness about her full feminine beauty! She was a real woman. Would you mind writing a whole lot more of these? I know I would like that a lot!
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23rd Jun 2011
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Jacksonville, NC Posts: 43
| Re: Outside looking in Ruby, this was a lovely story. Beautifully written. Can't wait to read more from you
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