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Old 21st Jul 2007   #6
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Melinda told James that she thought maybe they should check with the hotel for a room. He reluctantly agreed and took another lustful glance at Diane as he paid the bill. They ran next door in the pouring rain and as they opened it they noticed that there was not a soul to be found behind the desk.

They rang the bell and waited, cold and wet but strangely expectant. It must have been 5 minutes or more that they waited but what else were they to do? They had nowhere else to go.

When the hotel manager came up behind the desk Melinda could not believe her eyes. It was the good looking man from the restraunt. He smiled sheepishly and said, "sorry about the delay..." You do happen to be in luck; You are getting the last room of the night. And it just so happens to be next to the room that my wife and I share.

Melinda's heart sank, despite herself. "He has a wife," she thought. Just then in walked Diane with a carafe of coffee and four coffee cups.

"I thought you all might enjoy some more coffee." "Would you like to sit down while the guys take care of business?"

She motioned for Melinda to sit down next to the fireplace in the leather sofa as she placed the coffee and cups on the coffee table.

"I saw my husband eyeing you," she smiled at Melinda to let her know that she was not jealous. He sure does love looking at attractive young women.
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The look on Melinda’s face made Diane giggle. She wasn’t certain if Melinda was surprised at the fact that Jeff and she were married or if Melinda’s mind had jumped a couple of light years ahead and totally plugged into the strong sexual undertow at work.

Soon Jeff and James came to sit by the fire with the women as Diane went to get more coffee for them all. James removed his outer gear and settled back into the sofa with a bit of a smug look on his face. Clearly he and Jeff and come to some sort of agreement other than the cost of the room.

Melinda took off her jacket and knitted cap, which saw her gleaming russet hair fall in soft waves around her face. Removing her jacket quickly revealed that she had a well-toned body and long legs fit for hiking and climbing with a nice counter balance of breasts. In the restaurant no one would have ever suspected the transformation these two simple moves had created.

Diane came back in with the coffee and a bottle of brandy to put in it, and as she poured Melinda’s coffee she stopped in mid pour and stared at her. Slowly setting the pot down, she took Melinda’s hand, pulled her to her feet and paraded her around the room.

“My, my, our quiet little mouse is quite the goddess, gentlemen! I feel a bit scruffy next to her. What do you men think? Are we an even match or do you need to see more to really make a solid comparison?”

When Diane said that, she quickly reached toward Melinda, took her gently by the upper arms, pulled the hair away from her face and began to kiss her on the mouth. Melinda didn’t need any brandy to know that this was something she had wanted to try for a long time, so she stepped eagerly into Diane’s embrace with slightly parted lips and deepening feelings in her pussy.
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She felt completely at ease. Her mind didn't freeze at it so often would during hotter encounters. Something had changed in Melinda. Surely the evening's events, the stranding the freezing cold, the pooring rain, leading to this; the warm fire, the brandy, the gorgeous company and the blatant sexual energy in the room. had something to do with it. But she'd been alone for so very long, and a little indulgence for the first time in her life was probably deserved.

She opened her body fully to Diane, relishing in feeling her warm and cloth clad bosom press against her own. As her lips parted the first contact of their tongues created a sudden spark inside her, travelling right through her, passing her heart, fluttering it, causing her breasts to stiffen and rise and her stomach jumped slightly. As the current passed filled her, her pussy twitched... She knew she was dampening. An amazing feeling, her first erotic moment with another woman. One she was sure to fully enjoy.

As her head tilted right, to fully engage Diane's tongue... her eyes opened and her eyes met James'. His handsome, surfer face had brightened up, his charm radiated. He was just hte kind of guy that Melinda had always wanted, but never felt worthy of. Too scared to try. Their eyes locking, he gave her a little wink, and began to get up from his seat by the fire.
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