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Old 28th Jul 2007   #11
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Melinda continued to kiss Diane, their tongues heatedly exploring each other. She sensed, more than saw, James make is way behind Diane, and as she pressed her mouth tighter onto Diane's she felt his hands brush against her as he cupped her hips and moved in close, pushing Diane closer.

"Mmmmmmmm," Diane moaned as she savored Melinda's hot mouth, and felt James strong hands enveloping her. She wiggled back into him, feeling his hardness with her ass. His hands moved up her sides as he leaned forward and, moving her hair, began kissing her neck and cheek.

His hand moved around her waist, squeezing between the two women's writhing bodies, finding her breasts, cupping them gently, feeling her nipples harden at his touch. He continued to lick and suck gently, his lips running up and down Diane's neck. His eyes open and watching Melinda as she continued to devour Diane's lips. He winked again and finding the buttons of Diane's dress, he pulled it apart sharply, grabbing her bra with his fingers, releasing both breasts into the steamy night air.
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Dianne groaned as she felt her breasts gain their freedom. Melinda drove her tongue deeper into Diannes mouth as James cups Diannes breasts in his hands tweaking and pulling her nipples. Her ass grinding into his groin as her tongue dances with Melinda's. Jeff looks on for a moment longer, then stands and goes behind Melinda and begins to undress her. Opening the buttons on her shirt he realizes that she is not wearing a bra underneath. As it opens and her alabaster skin begins to show both women release their kiss and gaze into each others eyes. As they look at each other they notice their bodies are only seperated by the warm hands of Jeff and James.
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Dianne and Melinda, as if with one mind, reach to remove the clothing of the other. Their mouths nip and lick on shoulders and necks as they bend to complete their tasks. Melinda begins to move her hands between Dianne's bare ass and James hot, stiff cock. As much as she wants to take the measure of James, she wants to touch Dianne more.

Dianne's breasts are swollen with desire and she can feel her pussy oozing with warm liquid, stinging and pulsing with anticipation at what is to come.

"Someone finger me or fuck me," Dianne begs. She wants and needs Melinda's mouth and hands on, in and around her pussy. James kisses her neck and shoulders and continues to pull and stretch her nipples, squeezing them almost painfully.

Jeff's hands move from Melinda's breasts. One hand proceeds down her belly and slowly creeps between her thighs as his other hand cups the curve of her ass, teasing a finger into the valley of her cheeks and reaching still farther to meet the other hand that is just beginning to cup her sex.

Melinda moans at the cradle sensation and bends forward giving Jeff better access. She puts her mouth to Dianne's mound, sucking gently, quickly slipping her tongue in and out to tease Dianne's clit. Dianne's ass grinds against James until she feels him take his cock out and slip it between her legs.
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Outside, watching with lust filled eyes, stood a quiet figure. She stood, pinching and pulling on her nipples with one hand as her other pressed aganist her dripping pussy, fingers sliding in and out as she rubbed her palm rubbed aganist her clit. She paused as a small orgasm rippled through her and then started again, her juices running down her legs, coating her hand. Her breasts heaving as she watched knowing that soon she would have her chance to experence what she saw in the bedroom.
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With one hand on Melinda's hip, and the other on his cock, Jeff rubs his rod between Melinda's folds, lubricating his pulsing hardness, and letting her have a small feel of the pleasure to come. Then, and her legs quiver with desire, he presses himself into her hot, dripping wetness, sliding easily inside with a single prolonged thrust.

"Ahhhhh!" moans Melinda as she feels his manhood spreading her from within. Her loins are afire and her senses overloaded as Diane continues to cover her lips in kisses and rub her hardened clit against Jeff's steady strokes.

For Jeff, the outside world ceases to exist. It has narrowed to the feel of Melinda's hips in his hands and the sheath of her tight pussy around his throbbing cock. He continues to drive into Melinda in long steady strokes, pausing for effect every third or forth thrust, gyrating his hips, letting her feel him as deep and as full as possible. He reaches down, grabbing a dangling breast and squeezes it, using it as leverage as his hips pound into hers, his balls slapping against Diane's frantically rubbing fingers.
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