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Old 18th May 2007   #1
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[b][size=medium]Got this idea elsewhere, but think it's fun, so here goes. ... I will begin a story with a sentence or two and each person, so inclined can add one more sentence to keep the story going. There are only two rules: [a] make it steamy and erotic, and keep the story going. ........... So let's begin:[/size]

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It was a dark and stormy night and Melinda and James, strangers to each other, found themselves trapped by the weather in the same little roadside restaurant along the northern California Coast.

James was a naturalist at Yosemite National Park and enjoyed rock climbing and escorting tours through the park. He was tall, fit, in his mid-30's and had a sexual magnetism about him that few could resist.
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With the uncommon naturalist look. James looked more like a "beach bum". Shaggy blonde hair, blue eyes that clearly showed the soul. He was built and exhumed sexuality wherever he walked. Never failing to turn every woman's head, all of them lusting after him.

Melinda was a simple looking, not a raging beauty by far. She glanced through hooded eyes across the restaurant towards the good looking man there. "Pretty boys" never really her type she still felt her panties dampen as her mind exuded thoughts that she couldn't believe herself thinking.
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James and Melinda sat down at a table next to the window. They could see the rain pouring down outside and they were glad to be out of the deluge. The waitress came to see if they wanted anything to drink. They both ordered coffee...she asked for cream. She wondered if they would have to spend the night in the little motor hotel next door.

There was a television on in the corner of the ceiling and the weatherman was talking about how the rain was not expected to let up any time soon. He was also talking about flash flood warnings. It was highly suggested that if you did not have to be out in this weather you should just stay inside.

They had sat accross from the good looking man and as he made eye contact with them he said, "looks like we might be stuck here for a while." There was something about the way he said it that made her wonder if he was scheming for a little fun.
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The television continued to blare against the steady pounding of the rain outside. Prime-time programming gave way to local news and a gloomy forecast for the next several hours. A low pressure system had stalled above them and didn't appear likely to move in the foreseeable future.

The waitress returned and refilled their coffee... Melinda barely noticed, day dreaming of the man across the floor, her mind pleasantly numbed by the incessant drumming on the roof.

James nodded his thanks and noticed the cleavage on their waitress... Diane, her nametag said. Wasn't her shirt open wider than before? A button or two more now undone. He looked up guiltily from her tightly contstrained breasts and now noticed the perspiration glistening on her neck and cheeks. It was warm in the diner, but was it really THAT warm??? His eyes took in the entire scene. Diane had a nice body; a full rack, long legs, nice hips. Her tight clothing accentuated every curve.

"Ya'll know we're supposed to be closed, now, don't ya?" Diane said, one hand on her hip, a now half-empty carafe of coffee dangling from her propped hand.

"I think the boss wants to close up soon." she said, non-chalantly, her hand moving to her neck and lightly tracing the rivults of perspiration that had formed on her skin.

"We have no place to go," said James, his eyes fixed on Diane's slowly descending fingers.
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Diane's pouting lips grew into a small smile as she watched James eyes follow her fingers. "Have you checked for a room next door?" she asked as her fingers continued down her neckline. Her smile becoming larger as she watched his eyes follow her hand. Melinda watched the play from across the table, in her mind chastising Diane but finding that her eyes were also following those same fingers.
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