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spir3d

Greetings everyone,

Please use this forum to give constructive criticism to our members about their stories. We welcome comments and suggestions or full discussions around a certain area or the entire story.

You can also use this forum to brainstorm new ideas or story projects.

Enjoy and, most of all - be mindful!

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lushi

This is quite disappointing. I wanted some help on a story idea, but I don't want it to get lost in a what can be long string. Can a "new topic" functions be listed here so that my issues aren't amalgamated with others? pretty please!!!!

With extra loves and kisses to the mind gods here. There will be a special synapti firing in your hornor .....er ... ah...... sometime so I dare think!!!

sniggles, snoggles, kiggles and hosses!!!

Lushi

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lilypad

Well Lush - it's all fixed for you. Post away.

Although - the 'Gods' are looking forward to those kisses, hugs and other things that you promised. Hmmm I think they may be expecting a little more too!

Enjoy!

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firefightinangel

Hey y'all..I posted a new story the other day. It's on a subject I don't find myself writing in all that often. If someone could please read "Joining of the Soul" and please let me know what you truly think..especially Lily or Lushi I'd really appreciate it. I'm looking for criticism I know will come from your thoughts and not worrying if you're gonna hurt feelings or not..lol thnx..and hugz...

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