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Old 24th Jan 2009   #6
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...and that is when the fair brunette came in with a grim as wide as the state of Texas on her face.
She immediately place a bowl of fresh fruit on the night stand near the bed and started to suck, lick, nibble and tug away at Goldi's incredible D cups.....and just as she reached over for a large strawberry, Goldi began to awaken, so the hot brunette filled her mouth with a big fat juicy strawberry to allay her fears. Besides, Goldilocks was not a shy one. The three bares were not either...but Goldilocks wanted to be really bold and fit right in with these three hotties so she suddenly(!)..........
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Goldilocks slightly stirred from her slumber, still the feeling of excitement form the steaming articles she had read previously.
Goldilocks didn't hear the rustle of the bares downstairs and slowly started to massage her breasts, she didn't notice one of the bares watching her from the doorway, her hands started to caress lower and lower until she reached her warm wet pussy, she slowly massaged herself inserting one finger then two, while her thumb massaged her clit, she was getting more and more aroused when all of a sudden she felt a warm breath on her pussy, then the slow licking and sucking, she removed her hands to let the intruder work his magic, the moans began to get louder and louder.
Before Goldilocks knew what was happening she had two more bares in her room. touching her and licking her. There was one female bare and two male bares. The male bares were already hard at seeing Goldilocks laying on the bed naked and were ready to play. Goldilocks began to suck the tall blonde bares cock, slowly putting the head of his cock in her mouth and sucking in and out going deeper and deeper, while the female bare sucked her nipples and the other male bare inserted his big hard cock in her pussy and started fucking her hard, Goldilocks was in heaven, what a fairy tale adventure this was.
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The scene was wild and orgiastic with Goldilocks being licked, sucked, fucked, sucking, while the bi women all got tangled up in an utterly confusing weave of legs, lips, pussies, balls, cocks, anuses with each other and the men, until the room was full of heavily breathing orgasmic bares! The word mayhem wouldn't adequately describe all the orgasms that were had. The noise they made was happily in a deep dark forest.
But it just so happened that a mounted park ranger was riding by and overheard all the noise.
So he went to see what was up and who was going down.....anyway, he stopped outside the house and figured that he couldn't go in alone. So he waited till the noise quieted down. He then stood back and fired a round into the air and said like John Wayne would, "Alright, I want everybody out of there!!"
Indeed, just as in John Wayne movies everybody cleared out and stood naked and panting before him. Seeing how hot the women were he began to wonder how to punish them all for being so naughty. That is when he tied each one up with handcuffs and roped them all together in a circle facing each other, including the men. He had to chuckle to himself at the sight of all those sweet bare asses, and being an old Master, he decided to........
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grab the horse whip that was located near by and test it first on the ground to see if it was going to work as a tool to punish the bares and Goldilocks. Snap went the whip. Crack when it hit the ground and the dust moved and an impression was left. He put the whip down and instead removed his belt and held onto the buckle. "Alright, the only question is which one of you is going to be punished first?" A nervous giggle left the safety of the circle and the ranger demanded who it was that giggled. "It was me sir. I"m so sorry." Goldilocks responded. And the ranger grabbed her hair by such force that her head bobbed first backward and then forward as he cracked the leather belt on her ass. Goldilock bit her bottom lip, closed her eyes and let the joy of the pain inside her. She turned to Ebony and hungrily kissed her lips. When she was sure she couldn't take anymore...
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Goldilocks began to beg the ranger to fuck her or let somebody else do it...but the had to have it NOW!!!
Her clit and her lips were so engorged not just from the excitement but form all the blood the belt brought to her external vaginal area! Her clit and lips were big and hard and wide open, pulsing for relief, dripping all over her upper things and back to her pucker hole.
Ebony Raven wanted to get at her so badly that she began to struggle to get at Goldi and that is when "whack" she felt the sting of the ranger's belt on her ass too! The ranger then got her to the point where she was begging to be fucked too!! He began to call them all kinds of nasty names like you naughty bitch, you slave slut, and threaten them.
Seeing this display and how turned on the girls were getting the others started to call the ranger names back to make him let them have it as well!
That's when the men on the other side of the circle upon seeing the hunger for relief on their faces and the sizes of the growing clits and lips in the sunlight they had rushed forward to take their hot pokers and aim them right at both women's pussies. The very sight of them almost made the men cum right there in mid air! They had to move!
Well when the ranger and the others saw that, a primal scene erupted and......
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