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Old 31st Mar 2009   #11
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Default Re: Let's write a story: The three bares

In swooped the marines in helicopters, and threw them all into the brink for "inciting/participating in a disturbing piece/riot." THE END
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Really? And I thought what Raven told me was entirely different.

It seems that when the Ranger cracked his whip it made the girls hotter and hotter and suddenly they turned in unison to face the ranger and wanted to ravage his body and smother every of him with their bodies and there was nothing he could do but accept that things had changed and drastically.

Raven saw a tree and had an idea. She leaned to the girls and whispered something but the ranger could not hear. Ebony saw some rope near the shed and quickly ran to get it and she took the duct tape that was lying nearby on a shelf in the shed. She returned to the group and pulled the rangers hands up above his head and tied his wrists. She took a piece of the duct tape and placed it over his mouth. If and when he was allowed to pull it off it would rip the stubble from his face.

Raven and the others dragged the ranger over to a nearby tree with a dartboard. Raven threw the dartboard away and instead placed the rangers bound hands onto the hook which use to hold the board. Each girl hungryily stripped off the rangers clothes and at some point he had quit struggling and was now standing at full attention.

The worst thing that these girls could do was to use him and throw him away and that's exactly what they did. Each girl mounted the ranger's hard cock and then screamed as they felt their pussie's exploding. You could hear the ranger's breath get faster and heavier as each of the four women took their turn. Just when he was sure he would explode they would stop what they were doing and then just start with each other as he watched.

Finally, it was Raven's turn. Raven wanted to play a little more nasty and she took the band from her hair and tied it onto the ranger's semi-erect cock. "Do you want to fuck me? Do you baby? How badly?" All he could do was mumble under the tape but his eyes spoke volumes about his answer.

Raven watched as his cock grew to full attention again and watched the band tighten on his now fully erect cock. Raven loved knowing she could do whatever she wanted and he could do nothing about it. She reached for the tape and violently ripped it off along with some of his whiskers. The ranger screamed out but was quickly silenced when Raven snapped the elastic band on his cock and she whispered, "Now did I tell you to make a sound? You are a naughty boy. I am in control."

With that Raven mounted his cock and rode it. Each stroke of his cock entering her pussy felt so good. So tight. So wet. So hot. Dripping. she could feel the head of his cock stroke her gspot and all at once she came and sprayed him. His breaths once more picked up. She snapped the band. The ranger grimaced but this time he was quiet. His cock remained erect and his breathing slowed down. Once more she rode him until she exploded again.

Each girl came to the ranger now and hungrily licked off Raven's juices from his cock and balls and once more the ranger started to breath heavy and moans left his lips. Just when they were sure he was going to come, they did the worst thing they could have done. They left him tied to the tree naked with a huge erection and walked away into the forest.

As far as I know the girls made their own clan and have never been seen since that day, although there have been so many stories of men going missing in the forest. I guess we'll never know now will we Dionysius?
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