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Old 10th Jan 2009   #1
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Default Let's write a story: The three bares

THE THREE BARES

Once upon a time, in a deep dark forest, there were three bares who lived that way because they just lived with what their Mamas gave them. They barely noticed being bare until one day they decided to take a walk together in the woods just as they were, in order to gather berries.

While they were away a lady known to the world as "Goldilocks" found their humble abode, complete with hot tub and sauna room, as well as a printed and bound copies of the steamiest stories from "Mindspired" sitting on a night stand bye one of the beds. She began to read the stories and soon found them making her hot, so she was soon bare too, pleasured herself, and fell asleep.

That is when the door downstairs began to open.........
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...and back in came the three bares.
One was a tallish redhead with C cups and a full lovely furry red bush that let her lips show.
The second was an average sized brunette with B cups and a shaved landing strip below.
The third was a shortish raven with A cups and a neatly waxed pubic area.

Well, were they ever surprised to see Goldilocks with her D cups and punky died pink, blue and green bush a little gathered up in a cute black bow that lay across her mound.

Seeing as the bares were all bi, they wondered if Goldilocks........
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would stay sleeping long enough for them to look over her fit body.

As Goldilocks slept, Raven with the raven black hair, gently climbed onto the bed trying not to make a sound. Closer still and now she could feel Goldilocks heat from her naked body. An aroma caught her attention and all at once she dove towards Goldi's sweet pussy being careful not to touch her as she slept. Already Raven's pussy was getting wet and her nipples were erect.

Raven wanted more and...
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more .....more and than some. The aroma tickled her nostrils as she moved closer to the scent. Raven leaned in close to Goldilocks body. Her tongue flickered in and out across her nipples. Goldilocks moaned softly. Raven slid her tongue slowly down Goldilocks torso. Raven stopped at her navel and slowly circled her tongue in and out. Raven's hand slide down to goldilock's heated wetness. Raven slowly rubbed her finger along the outside of her wetness. Goldilocks moans and moves her hips up to Raven's hand. Raven's index finger rubbed her clit as her tongue pressed deeper into her navel. The aroma had begun stronger and Raven slid her head and sucked Goldilocks' clit slow and hard.
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Seeing Raven’s face buried between Goldi’s legs, Red was over come with the desire to join. She felt along Raven’s athletic, butt, letting her fingers slip slowly into Raven’s wetness.

Raven stifled a moan, determined not to wake Goldi from her slumber. She shifted, her body backwards, forcing Red’s fingers deeper. Raven sighed, Red was a master with her fingers. Though Red was not content with just using her fingers, she spread apart Raven’s legs and labia, exposing Raven’s wetness. Red’s tongue wiggled in, penetrating Raven. Raven couldn’t help but groan.

Still deep in slumber, Goldi’s hands grabbed Raven’s hair. Raven was suddenly very glad for the arrival of the trespasser in there home.
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