A work in progress

Nightwatcher · 30th Jun 2007

Thanks JP for the tips. I love to write,but alas, I still do not have the finess I would like to have. Will keep you in mind when I want a review of the finished product. Thanks again

lilypad · 2nd Jul 2007

JP always has same GREAT suggestions on how to make your article more reader friendly and make it more imaginable.

As he said.. this is how he would have written it - oh and we do love his work - take his suggestions and then put it in your own words. You can learn so much from reading other people's work too.

He had some very note worthy suggestions on dialogue - a lot of people make these mistakes.

And as JP would tell you - edit, edit and edit again.

Don't forget... everyone has their own style. I have helped a couple people in the past and their own thoughts and fantasies completely changed. Oooops - sorry! I got my nosy ass out of the picture now - and guess what.... they're back!

Keep working on this piece - I think it will be fabulous when it's done!

30th Jun 2007	#6
Nightwatcher Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Illinois Stories: 28 Posts: 416 Gender: Male Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Re: A work in progress Thanks JP for the tips. I love to write,but alas, I still do not have the finess I would like to have. Will keep you in mind when I want a review of the finished product. Thanks again __________________ Erotic Stories and Adult Literature

2nd Jul 2007	#7
lilypad Administrator Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Right where I belong.. fo Stories: 47 Posts: 1,002 Gender: Female Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Re: A work in progress JP always has same GREAT suggestions on how to make your article more reader friendly and make it more imaginable. As he said.. this is how he would have written it - oh and we do love his work - take his suggestions and then put it in your own words. You can learn so much from reading other people's work too. He had some very note worthy suggestions on dialogue - a lot of people make these mistakes. And as JP would tell you - edit, edit and edit again. Don't forget... everyone has their own style. I have helped a couple people in the past and their own thoughts and fantasies completely changed. Oooops - sorry! I got my nosy ass out of the picture now - and guess what.... they're back! Keep working on this piece - I think it will be fabulous when it's done! __________________ Erotic Stories and Adult Literature

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